Idk about this one. I feel the author wanted to create an omega top x alpha bottom story but didn’t know how so they’re twisting and jumping through hoops to make something out of it?
I’m not against omega top x alpha bottom. But when authors write this dynamic, the thing that makes sense the most is that the alpha willingly wants to bottom for the omega. He’s still an Alpha but he desires the penetration. But in this story the alpha reacts and acts like an omega. He’s weaker and fragile while in rut while the omega seems nonchalant and unaffected. Like when the omega was in heat, he was stroking himself instead of fingering himself. I feel the author couldn’t properly make a story with a top omega and put all the normal and usual characteristics of alpha and omega and reversed the gender names. Because the top is acting and behaving like an alpha and the bottom is acting and behaving like an omega, pheromones wise. So the reverse genders lose their meanings.
Switch their genders and this is a regular alpha x omega story.
The only thing the author did, was keep mentioning that the top is an omega and the bottom is an alpha. In name only, because it feels and reads as a regular omegaverse.
I’m not entirely bothered though. I wish this would have been written as a power bottom omega and submissive alpha. But since I like the body proportions of the characters, I’ll keep reading.
REAL, DAMMIT
You described what I was feeling perfectly!
I’m trying not to focus too much on the sex scenes because of the anatomy. So tired of authors drawing the anus like a vagina. Everything from the shape to the position tells you the author is drawing a vagina. I’m used to bad anatomy in yaoi/BL. But when the authors so openly draw the asshole in the place and shape of a vagina it throws me off so bad.
I love the art style. I love that the bottom is not a weak meek crybaby. So, it would have been perfect that his body looked like a normal slim man and not like a flat chested woman with a dick.
But oh well, there’s barely any good stories going around lately. So, I’ll take what I’m given.
I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE. These authors are just drawing straight porn but with extra steps
Nah frfr
This is why I don’t read yaoi manga anymore :((((((((( the cliffhangers and the time you have to wait for a new chapter is so long. I want to cry!!!
Yeah. I waited till season one was completed to read this story and I’m glad the author brought it up in the note. I noticed how this story is softer and more fluffier and less dramatic than others from this author. Giving the set up it’s been created, I thought we would have more angst. I’m guessing Adam overmedicated in the past to the point he lost his sight and Eve accidentally injured his leg. So, Eve couldn’t forgive himself and due to guilt ( a new extremely heavy emotion) he decided to erase Adam from his memories because he realized his love for Adam was the thing pushing Adam to the edge so he might have thought “if I don’t love Adam, he will be able to have a normal life.”
I like the story. Brothers without a tomorrow never fails. However, I wouldn’t put it at the top three of my favorite story by brothers without a tomorrow. They have more complex and dramatic stories than this one. Dear zero feels somehow plain compared to the others.
When are people going to understand that not all male x male stories out here are about love. This is not a romance. This is a story about revenge. So it’s meant to make you feel extremely uncomfortable.
The characters do not love or like each other. And they never will. And even if they did in the end, it will be a response to all the trauma they both have been through.
Comments like “what the fuck” “this is so messed up” are so nothing and unnecessary. I thought we all had criteria to read stories
Why can’t we have more bottoms like this! I am crying I’ve been starving for this type of dynamic
Back to the good old stuff!
Toxicity at its finest! I’m loving this is so sick lmaooooo
Just hope the author draws him in more handsome way ╥﹏╥
You know how people always victimize bottoms saying they deserve better, that the tops are trash, etc etc. Yeah. Some of them cannot be defended. Some bottoms simply like violence and are natural masochists. I don’t wanna hear “it’s a trauma response” I don’t care. Being traumatized doesn’t give you the right to put that responsibility on everybody around you. There’s a point where you have to be held accountable for your actions. And that’s what I think this author did with this.
Where was this?! This is so good and entertaining. I love how every single character walks the morally grey and ambiguous path. They're all assholish in different ways. This is an entertaining story if you put your morals aside for once and read it as a comedy. I’m having so much fun I can’t believe I took so long to pick it up!