Overall what’ve have read so far the stroy is losing the red thread. The plot is hardly anywhere to be seen and it’s Just lacking that special something. Idk this is just my opinion. Not only that I really don’t like how do many older men are touching her constantly and picking her up. Like I get she’s weak and a child but it’s really uncomfortable for me as a reader to see this. Personally I really don’t recommend it, I my self love romantic stories and only at chapter 30 we see a bit of romance but it won’t go anywhere for while. It’s more of a much fantasy world type thing. Really could have been better. I give a solid 4.5/10
2021-02-05 16:25 marked
Mhmmm...