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After reading another story about reunion that is slightly similar to this, I see why people have bad reactions to this manhwa. The pacing and structure of this story is not very well written. The author chose to first show us the present for 50 chapters and then immediately jump into the past and stay in the past for so long that people forget the present and more importantly the main character. With reincarnation/reunion stories, there has to be a good amount of jumping back and forth from the present to the past in order to keep readers interested AND informed of the entire context of the story. With how it is written right now, readers miss Ian and are unable to reconcile the fact that Ian and Brian are supposed to be the same person/soul.