
What the fuck is up with the 3rd story. Messy, incomplete story with plot holes, the size of a black hole, with a "non-ending" that ruined this shit even more. I don't know how a story could have so much potential and it just blows up in your face. You know what, I agree with others, FUCK YOU author.

I have read my fair share of gangster/undercover stories and it does not surprise me that ML is the one who killed the MC's parents. Their dynamic surprisingly works for me. But yes its mostly just smut and very little plot. I also question where this is going, like what's the point. Like others have said, he's just going to find out ML murdered his parents and then be with him. So what's the point? There's not much of an interesting approach you can take here.

This piece of shit just thinks about himself, clearly from him thinking if he wants "a competitive edge, he needs Kim Dan; its all down to my jinx; "gotta get to Dan through Granny" He hasn't at all noticed Dan's horrible condition even tho he slept with him. Like bro BE FUCKING FOR REAL. This shit really is 10x worse than BJ ALEX.

Very sweet story but lacking in some depth with the pacing being too quick. Could've delved a little more into how they came to love each other and the realistic obstacles they would face as a same sex relationship and being from different classes. The other gripe I have with this is Noah's look and attire as sometimes his outfits i.e. the cape looks great but many other times he's wearing women's attire or attire befitting a child like his knee high socks and short trousers. He also looked a little too feminine and juvenile. Other than that, I think the story was cute and an easy read.

I got a notification about this and DAMN I didn't know it already finished. Last time I read was somewhere around chapter 60 and it was getting really boring, cliche and uninteresting compared to the beginning. According to recent comments, my gut was right about this taking a bad turn. Sigh* such a disappointment to learn it did not get better.

Its not just me right? The chapters in this manhwa is super short compared to Omega complex and I'd argue this is not good. Waiting for weekly updates only for it to be so little progress in the story. We got a whole ass chapter just of them studying and going outside for a quick smoke. Meanwhile in Omega complex, we can have a whole chapter where Yoonwoo goes out for a smoke, gets confessed to by Dohyun, rejects him and brings Taegyeom home. No doubt this manhwa will be just as good but 3-5 of these chapters being in one makes more sense to me.

Judging by this author's previous work, "Kiss me, Liar" and the beginning 9 chapters of this manhwa, I already do not have high hopes. Keith was already bad enough and Chase seems no better than Keith. In chapter 5 he already assaults Josh by pistol whipping him in the face and then he proceeds to nearly shoot him but only be unable to bc his gun is jammed or empty. And THEN he KICKS Henry off of the helicopter into this hoard of zombies called fans and nearly killed him. IDK how this could be any better than Kiss me Liar bc she had 60 plus chapters to salvage Keith's character and still did not manage to do that. The names are atrocious. "Chase miller, Joshua Bailey"...the most BORING, uncreative white names. At the moment, the only good thing is the art and Josh's tenacity. Moral of the story: this author makes AWFUL male leads with no explanation too, not even a half-baked, unjustified ,sad ass backstory.

If the story follows the novel, Chase's worst moments are in these first chapters. If it helps, he's in a terrible mental state because he takes experimental drugs to stop his ruts, because he's traumatised to the point that he refuses to sleep with anyone. IMO, his character does get salvaged, and he is extremely different from Keith. Take Kiss Me, Liar as an example, Keith sleeps with everything in his sight, and gets uke to make him lists of women to sleep with, and even then, he is an asshole rapist. Josh on the other hand isn't as weak as the other uke, as he is very experienced and also as you've seen in the recent chapter, doesn't really take shit. I believe that this story if adapted correctly, won't have rape, especially in the main couple, as Chase in the novel, gets mortified after hearing that Pete is his child, because he gets worried that he raped Josh, which he didn't do. He is an asshole more so at the start, but he becomes more submissive at one point. I don't blame your skepticism, as honestly, the bar is in hell most of the time with bls.
Here is the novel if you would like to have a skim through:
main: https://blsnacks.wordpress.com/category/kiss-me-if-you-can/

No dont compare it to kiss me liar, this is far far better than it. The only thing bad abt seme is his attitude and potty mouth which again as the person above stated stems from the drugs he has to take and a particular childhood trauma caused by his brother. Other than that chase is a good seme, he refuses to sleep with anyone even in the worst situations and josh was the only person he slept with. Later on you will slowly see how Submissive and emotional chase is. Kiss me liar is dogshit plot glorifying rape and Cheating, this is nothing like that.

Man, manhwas seem to really like this gangster seme x young almost minor uke in a rural setting huh? "2020" and "A gig of the day" both feature a very similar plot to this. The whole age gap thing is eh but the problem with this is just the lack of diversity in plot. It's just older gangster guy who's morally grey but we don't know what he actually does whose portrayed to be this bad boy but deep down a kind person while the uke is just this helpless little thing who looks super young and is almost a minor but not really (i.e. 19-21) and has debt bc his dad fucked his family over but he's jailbait and incredibly naïve. AND after 20 chapters, we still don't know much about ANY of the characters beside their designated stereotype so HOW THE FUCK is this any different from the other two manhwa's I mentioned? The art? I mean this shit is alright but just boring bc its copy and paste.
For the first few chapters, I feel the pacing is off like its cutting out certain parts or translation is off? This makes it very confusing to understand what is happening. I didn't even know what the premise was from reading the first couple of chapters until I read a reader's summary of this manhwa