
Feels like the author had an idea for a plot (ML keeps breaking up with people after a week, won't have sex, nothing known about him except that he really enjoyed soccer and the MC followed him to keep watching him play) but nothing was fleshed out which makes it seem like the author abandoned the plot midway through the story

Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee Please don't be pee please don't be pee

Creeped the hell out of me. I don't know which part creeped me out the most: the ml's pupiless eyes and smile, the adoptive bro's crush on his 6 years older step dad, him getting horny at seeing his adoptive dad get fucked by his bio mom, the ml's obsession with his adoptive bro or the ml setting up a scene where adoptive bro could see their parents fucking
Honestly so heartbreaking that he couldn't introduce himself as his boyfriend/husband