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ill give it to them it was pretty cute, but that was not a satisfying conclusion. when i read the grand finale, (in a grandiose voice) "the talk" between the two of them i was like "thats it? all that for "so thats what happened guh"?" i think it couldve been handled better, and i still am kind of mad at white haired guy for making a move on puppy eyed brown haired guy even though he knew that green eyed guy had a crush on him. thats breaking bro code isnt it? (i wouldnt know but if my friend had a crush on a guy i wouldnt make a fucking move on him) i didnt even get to see him apologize for that "cheap flirt" thing he said. all in all i think the ending was lacking, the strings couldve been tied a little better, but it still doesnt change the fact that i liked it and stayed till the end anyway.