The two newest chapters (11 & 12) have gotten a lot better. The story has gone more in depth and seems a lot less rushed than the first chapters. Honestly have some hope for this.
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It feels really dense and rushed, there haven’t really been many moments for us to connect to the characters much. Hope that changes later tho
Side characters feel like it’ll be the whole plot of the story. “He’s too weak to do it.” He does it “Well he’s still weak” seems to be the whole plot
Good time waster but other than that it doesn’t feel very thought out.
The dried snake penis ingredient reminds me when Steve Harvey tried that anti-wrinkle cream or whatever that was made of human foreskin.
Honestly the entire time I’ve been reading this I’ve been on the verge of tears. Honestly kinda confused how she hasn’t fully cried at least once yet but it’s probably cause her past lives.
Really like how the story’s progressing so far.
Bro her father made me cry ╥﹏╥
My face was leaking the entire time ╥﹏╥ It's so sad man- this was supposed to be the life where she was loved and got everything she wanted but now everyone she loved and relied on have turned on her
Honestly expected this to be another copy paste, but it’s actually a lot more unique than I thought. I like the storyline, and the personalities of the characters are iconic but not to the point it becomes annoying.