Nice story but I canttt with the goddamn two pyramids of Giza on her goddamn hair .. why they made her bangs look like the fricking McDonald’s logo it’s sooo distracting I can’t focus on the storyline when those mountains are staring at me every chapter.. those umbrellas hide mf ratatouille in kt pls artist fix this it’s so steep and pointy
Why is everyone calling brown hair knight annoying yea he might have been a bit pushy but he was nothing but kind , he saved her multiple times and he is such a sweet talker and he did what he thought he could do to win her heart my man did nothing wrong he’s just a bit more forward a his feelings and plus I liked how he told the fam his intentions !! Im his #1 defender
As someone who is not good in meeting new people I can attest that while he may have good intentions the way he is pushing and rushing our MC is not nice. Just think of it in your perspective, a guy you know just confessed to you and immediately tried to kiss you. Would you be happy meeting them again? Me, definitely not. I'd run at every chance I will get.
This story was great but then they started focusing too much on the emperor and the duke fued or whatever I’m so uninterested in those stuff I just want to see them go out have fun develop their relationship maybe get a new kid I literally fall asleep trying to read those royal affairs or whatever like ok I get it’s for the plot but don’t make it the entire 3 chapters I’m a row I need some fanservice
Chapters were all scrambled up. Didn’t understand translation half the time. Confused and with the backstory and we got so little scenes with the main couple together like bffr we got more lore out of the damn side couple than them. Not satisfied at alllll
The main couple had so much more potential I actually love their personalities but they gave us nothing tbhh it was a waste of time reading this for me
the fact that someone actually wrote this and drew this out as a story and is drawing out this child’s fantasy is what’s making it an obvious fetish of the artist. When I read the first chapter I thought it would just briefly show how tsubaki always loved yuu even though he didn’t really know what it meant and then time skip to when their older but this is just weird as hell…Innocent love is cute but when u draw out a child imaging an adult fiddling with themselves is it not clear pedophilia from the authors side? The thought that someone scripted this out thinking of all these scenarios of tsubaki doing stuff to a much older man and hinting that yuu might subconsciously like him back is soooo gross !! They may have made tsubaki’s intentions seem innocent, but the author’s is definitely not!
Another thing to note - literally just look at the authors other works underneath this manga… coincidence? I think not. All of the love interests look like children,, proof that this is made for a fetish group disguised as an innocent manga.
this is so spot on like if this story wanted to be ab an innocent first love there would not be all these other weird n gross details lyke… this story is tasteless and def fetishizy !!