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I dont understand all the comments thinking he should rush his revenge (or at least thats what they look like to me). Like dont get me wrong i want him to get it but it would feel too early if he did anything extreme now. Storytelling wise it would be silly and rushed for him to jump the gun. If the Uke is smart (like he has shown outside of his inexperience) he would keep quiet for awhile considering his opponent is a well rehearsed general who is not only very Obviously well educated and trained but also aware of the Ukes vengeful feelings. I want this to be a good story outside of the sex. Ya know, i hope the author takes time to flesh these characters out, make them 4D. Force them to reflect on each others past.
Maybe our Uke is gonna get a serious dose of realizing his dad wasnt as good of a man as he thought orr maybe our seme will be forced to consider that the the person he serves is dogshit (which i think he kinda knows and his job just started off as a way to get him off the streets.)
Anyways Im babbling. Id rather have a long read or a rushed story. Thats all I meant. (●￣(ｴ)￣●)