Lusyydia want to read (All 2)
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MC has it. I tried looking it up but was redirected to Neotenic complex syndrome. Apparently the body stops aging at a certain point, but not all at once at the same time, which leads to the development of diseases and issues that can cause an early death. basically some parts aged on, others didn't, some were at a different age etc. It's a scary disease. I think the author took inspiration from it and turned it into something less scary for the story. Not a bad idea.
I feel like the author has an idea about the plot, possibly an idea about what the endgame is, but everything else is just ... plain bad. It reads like a teenager crazy on hormones went and wrote a rape story, then changed his mind and added some supernatural to it, and now it's a clusterfuck that's supposed to go somewhere, hopefully anywhere near the plot.
Yeah I couldn't agree more. I like the idea of this story but the execution is bad. Just wtf is going on? The plot is a cluster fuck and the art isn't bad but it doesn't really depict what's happening in the story. It is probably trying to make the ML seem irresistible but I can't stand the way they have him sitting so feminine all the time with this sparkly light effect on him. He isn't a pagent queen but a torture victim. Make him behave and look like one plz. Who would look like he did after being tortured, raped, kidnaped and locked in a warehouse for 2 days not knowing if you would die.
The whole thing just reeks of horny teenager hormones. It's sad cuz this could have been great