This honestly had so much potential even after the author took a break, but in the end it was so forced and a lot of wasted effort, ( /TДT)/
(please know this is just my opinion ╥﹏╥)
Yeah I don’t get the progression of this story at all. I had to re-read it to try to understand how we even got to this point. The last time Jooin and Yahwei had sex was in chapter 35. And then that relationship turned into the most drawn out break up ever. The Cain stuff was also hard to read cuz Cain had no personality outside of being in love with Jooin. 2020 was a wild time. I can’t believe this was one of the most hated BLs out there. Like this doesn’t even hold a candle to Jinx on any scale lol.
I liked where it was going towards the end I think. Kinda surprised the author didn’t end the main story at 100 chapters. Could have been kinda clever to end it with them seeing each other and then saving the restart of their relationship in side stories, so those who want that could have that and those that didn’t could end the story there.
I agree sm. The plot was very back and forth and there was definitely a difference between change of plot when the author took a break, which I think heavily and negatively impacted the plot of the story because of the sudden change in plot. There was so much build up with Cain at the end that most readers started expecting Cain to be end game and then he wasn’t which lead to an even bigger disappointment for those who were rooting for Cain. Usually when authors who write love triangles usually lean towards the characters end game throughout the story so that the readers get a sense of where the character stands.
Im low-key shocked about jinx, but I’m also not because a lot of readers excuse//over look the rape and romanticize the top because he’s “good looking” or that it’s “just fiction” … ( ̄∇ ̄")
I love how she doesn’t exactly let things slide and when riften is being a jerk she will do it herself like the queen she is, I do love myself an independent queen (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Fr, ppl treating maxi as weak when she's doing the best she can is insane. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ shes doing the most