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This story is actually really bad. The second half was alright. I need need this story to get an editor or something. I need her to start showing and not telling. I didn’t see there love blooming.
The whole dog thing is stupid. I swear I’m broken and don’t have maternal instincts, but I really despised how baby crazy they were. Eww. I hate pregnancy.
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I’ve finally read a sorry (never going to mention the abomination that’s Jinx) in which the character discusses working out to look as muscular as he does! Typically, I’m left wondering what these business men who spends the whole day behind a desk do to be out here looking like Jake from “Shutline.” A character from “The Third Ending” was seen routinely running, but, like, that doesn’t build muscles.
Special mention to the Manga Contradict. My little firemen were putting in the work.
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I’m slowly going through and reading some of the sex scenes and, I enjoy the ML voicing his satisfaction. He looks like he enjoys the sex. He “tries” to make sure his partner is also enjoying the sex.
His character design is so, aah! So freaking beautiful!!!!
I enjoy dirty talks, so it’s doing something for me—though, it’s not really “dirty” talk. Overall, if we could get rid of the actual rod, this story would be a 10/10 for me. I love pining and a generous, possessive lover.
They’re cute.
ML’s design is too gorgeous.
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I swear, I’ve been wondering why I haven’t been able to enjoy this story as much as I was at the beginning, before…you know, the sex scenes. And I’ve just realized why. The fucking, astronomically sized dick! If this was going to be this bad, the author should have just given me lightsabers. Lightsabers never hurt me.
I’m peeved, bc I was enjoying this story SOOOOO much.
I need the Koreans to step it up and start making more live actions using their manhwa. I want this made into a live action!
I love this story so much.