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This feels... low effort? I'm not sure how to phrase it without disrespecting the hard work of the author. I think that it would have been fantastic if the hospital scene had been the last one and then for the end, we see the redhead leaving. Open ending, but with a clear meaning: it was not meant to be. This feels.. open? Is there going to be a separate story? Gahhhh I really didn't like it.