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I'm on ch 3 and I stop to see the comments. I can't believe with what I am reading so I check the genre a few times in other websites. How could the characters here have more tension and chemistry than most of the yaoi I've read???
That 'mine' in ch 3 made me stop for a moment to check if I'm reading the correct genre. Even the part where Jill tie the handkerchief (??) with HIS MOUTH on the mc finger to stop the bleeding was hotter than the kissing scenes in some bl.