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please don't hate me, but my opinion is, with every chapter, there's literally no development of plot or anything. its the same thing, jooin being stuck between these two. yahwi is literally the worst, and honestly, i just want cain to be better. when will jooin actually stick up for himself and EXPLAIN what he wants?? I'm so close to dropping this story, i feel like it had some potential at the beginning, but at this point, its getting repetitive... :(((((
this was an amazing story! i cant believe i held off on reading this for so long. i remember looking at ch 1 a couple months ago and seeing the art and thinking “uh..not yet.” wow the flow of the story was a bit fast for my taste but overall, the plot was realistic, showing the challenges of love between two people, and characters that were charismatic.
tbh i was confused at the start, because i thought that mira was dating her brother hahaha..oh and the art was VERY iffy for me at the beginning, since it’s such a different and unique style, but i saw a steady increase in quality from the author. i applaud u author!!! thank u for an amazing story! <3