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Like the artist definitely has potential, but the perspective is all over the place and the proportions are bonkers sometimes. Also, the way she's all sweaty in those few chapters is really unsettling like how can the ml not notice how bad she looks, especially in the newest chapter (ch.39). Like I know he probably doesn't like her enough to care, but not even an acknowledgement? From anybody? What's the point of drawing her like that if no one in the story even acknowledges it happening. Last thing, and this isn't something I like discussing cause i understand everyone goes at their own pace and stuff, but the pacing is pretty bad. The chapters are short (which isn't really smth I'm complaining about cuz again, the artist has their own life and time to worry ab) and there really is no development with their characters/relationship. They had that one encounter that ended with nothing happening besides them hating eachother even more, and the rest of the following chapters have just been further delving into how terrible of a person the fl is, we don't even know why she's such a dick other than some forced rich family drama that makes no sense. Plus, the name is "I hate you, will you have sex with me" and the cover art is pretty suggestive, but we're 40 chapters in and haven't seen even a glance of anything from anyone. I don't wanna sound like a weirdo starving for smut, but if you're gonna focus on character building rather than relationship development, name your series accordingly as to not attract the wrong crowd. I think that's all I gotta say, I'm not hating for no reason its just that most of these are things I've had problems with since I started reading ^^