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I love the story but at some point, the way the author executed it is around maybe if we could rate it from 1-10 then approximately around 5. If only they chose the right words it could have added 2 more points. And if they delivered the right emotions well, it should add 3 more points. So the total of points is now 10. Maybe because the author is new, that is why the story is still around 5 points, which is thats actually a good start for a newbie. Plus listening to some very helpful criticisms from their readers, and some guidance they could gain new experiences and lessons. So looking forward to their new projects in the future, if they plan to continue make new ones.(づ￣ ³￣)づ