I agree that this story is good but the way it is executed and the storytelling (or maybe its the translations) its bad. I mean not that bad to the point I couldnt understand a word, no. What I mean is, its so bad that I dont feel the thrill, the excitement, I dont feel any emotions from it. Well except to the part where she and her family were distant, I could feel the pain a little, but still not good.
For the translators/scanlators: kindly execute the storytelling a little better, even if its not the BEST, I just want to feel the emotions from the story. I know some of the others here will comment, "Then how about supporting the author instead and read the official translations instead of complaining?" First of all, I am not complaining. I am requesting for the trans/scanlators to make it a little better. Second of all, I just want them to improve it a little bit more and use the right words for the storytelling in order for some readers like me to experience the emotions. And lastly, I am broke which is why I am reading the manhwa here, and this manhwa has a potential only to be lessened by the lack of right words in this translations. And I am not saying that trans/scanlators arent doing their best to their works, I am actually proud of their works and I support them too, I am just requesting for them to improve it.
The fairy who was with MC most of the time wasnt given an introduction so Idk their name huhuuu
Idk family trees are confusing cause isnt Haruto, the omega boy, Alpha MC's younger brother? And The other kid who is an alpha, the Omega MC's son? So there are possiblities that Alpha MC adopted the omega MC's son then what does it make Haruto to that Alpha boy?
I love the story but at some point, the way the author executed it is around maybe if we could rate it from 1-10 then approximately around 5. If only they chose the right words it could have added 2 more points. And if they delivered the right emotions well, it should add 3 more points. So the total of points is now 10. Maybe because the author is new, that is why the story is still around 5 points, which is thats actually a good start for a newbie. Plus listening to some very helpful criticisms from their readers, and some guidance they could gain new experiences and lessons. So looking forward to their new projects in the future, if they plan to continue make new ones.(づ￣ ³￣)づ
Its not entirely the best but it is enough to make my heart crumble when their relationship turned to dusts
Its strange at first but now this is too much....Im going to get Diabetes and some cavities once I read all of its chapters....
Yoonggun saying none of them should have feelings for each other but him being obsessed towards Kyuho is so hypocrite!!! Plus unlike Yoonggun, Kyuho sees his friends more important that his fuck buddy. And Yoonggun on the other hand, treats everyone like shit and objects for entertainment and when he gets tired of them he throws them aside or distance himself from them. I dont know what is his problem, but if it has got something to do with his trauma then get over it. If you cant, try understanding Kyuho's point then, but if you are not even trying...then two words: "FUCK OFF".
But I think Tachibana is a Tachi because of his name TACHIbana get it??? Oh wait he can also be a neko because he like the panther and since panthers are part of the cat's family he can be a neko...ykw Im shutting the fuck up idek why I am saying this
I ship the brown haired girl and her bodyguard lololol I cant forget her line lmaooo "I almost fell for her" bitch whaaaaaaa
