Rei January 26, 2025 8:21 pm

Yeah, I can't read this. MC is brainless, and the plot is brainless. The premise starts off interesting with character possession, but wih the twist that her first attempt fails. After choosing death and cursing the true villainess, she finds herself with the choice to load like in a game. Par for course, she chooses to try again. That's where things begin to quickly fall apart. The first point could be due to translation issues, but she states that the load point must be from when she possessed the character. However, that's quickly disproven as she then follows the contradicting train of thought that she had already broken off from the villainess and chased the OG!FL's route. Ok.

Following that, the second interesting factor: the item shop is opened. However, we the audience are given no preview for it, and therefore, no hype is created for how it could possibly be used to spice up the story. It seems it will be a boring deus ex machina like tool. Likely, wherever a plot armor event happens that can't be explained, the MC will probably just say something like, "Sure am glad I bought this "item" from the store beforehand." Whatever.

In verse, MC glosses over it as well as she is suddenly ushered into her schedule for the day. More factors are revealed such as what the previous error message was intended for: MC inevitablely has holes in her memory. She can't even remember what her body's father's face looked like. Ok. In a later scene, it is proven that she can't even remember the layout of the mansion she lived in. Ok.

Then, what was the point of the regression? Regression is interesting only when a character can use it to change their life for better or for the worst. They don't have to be hyperintelligent, but at the very least, the character has to be able to make changes to the plot so we can enjoy the flap of a butterfly's wings events that follow.

All the MC has done is prove herself stupid and get blackmailed by one of the MLs (someone who can apparently go in and out of a noble woman's home whenever he wants? What are the servants and guards doing? Her father doesn't even question the breach in security. And ML, doesn't he have a job? Dumbass has to much free time apparently that he can just whimsically go in person to harass someone he apparently disdains to the point of death.). She's made no substantial future plans and is just letting herself be dragged around by everyone around her.

Oh, but not to worry. She most certainly did the most important thing a female MC should do! She made herself "prettier." Yay. Good job I guess.

Anyway, I persisted in reading until the scene where she accidentally gives the OG!FL alcohol. At that point, I just stopped. Made me too annoyed. She doesn't have to be smart, but at least give her enough of a brain that she's not that careless.

The story could get better from here, I don't know, but I don't have any plans on reading more.

Rei January 26, 2025 7:03 pm

It's just so refreshing reading a child character acting like a child.

    Crazy ass bitch January 26, 2025 9:44 pm

    I think it's because she is a child but with just the memories of the novel?

    Rei January 26, 2025 10:28 pm
    I think it's because she is a child but with just the memories of the novel? Crazy ass bitch

    Yep, and I'm not complaining.

    Crazy ass bitch January 26, 2025 10:30 pm
    Yep, and I'm not complaining. Rei

    Frfr

Rei January 22, 2025 11:43 am

When Harry Styles said, "My favorite thing about the movie is that, you know, it feels like a movie." I totally get him cause that's how I feel about this manga. I went in expecting the usual isekai nonsense, but catching me off guard, this is an actual story with an actual plot and actual likeable, developing characters.

I love everyone, and the story was touching. I think it could reasonably end with an open type ending with ch. 21. But nevertheless, I look forward to more adventures and seeing what other worlds he's traveled and heroes he's met. Plus, I genuinely like seeing him and Tia together.

Good story, look forward to more.

Rei January 22, 2025 9:36 am

Damn, that sucks. I really like the MC. His no common sense personality is just my type.

And isn't that the fantasy- quitting the job that doesn't appreciate you and then finding one near instantly that values you greatly.

Rei January 19, 2025 9:57 am

This is really good and a refreshing take on the rofan genre. Too bad the translation is a 2.5/5. The dialogue gets repeated or is in the wrong bubble, and the pronouns are all mixed up at times. Is it really too much to ask for a simple proofread or quality check before posting?

    AkumaKira January 24, 2025 9:26 am

    I'm uploading better translated chapters, you might want to give it a reread~! (⌒▽⌒)

    Rei January 24, 2025 9:48 am
    I'm uploading better translated chapters, you might want to give it a reread~! (⌒▽⌒) AkumaKira

    Σ(⊙▽⊙ ) whoa. Big fan of your work, thanks for doing what you do! I look forward to re-reading this

Rei January 15, 2025 12:27 pm

I haven't started reading this yet. I just want to be italicized.

    Rei January 15, 2025 12:28 pm

    ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

    Reio January 15, 2025 12:39 pm

    ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

    Rei January 16, 2025 7:58 am

    Caught up, very good! Looking forward to future chapters. It's a refreshing take on the dungeons, metahumans narrative.

Rei January 10, 2025 10:45 pm

MC has the look of a cool guy but the personality of a brat (positive).

    아리안네 January 11, 2025 12:17 am

    He's born a brat lol, he just matured a bit, his Dad raised him well. If he didn't met his Dad he will probably be a headache of society coz he have the qualities of a villain

    kyon January 11, 2025 12:36 am
    He's born a brat lol, he just matured a bit, his Dad raised him well. If he didn't met his Dad he will probably be a headache of society coz he have the qualities of a villain 아리안네

    lol he does have qualities of a villain HAAHAA his face when he's being a brat is hilarious

    Pompomegranate January 14, 2025 10:57 pm
    He's born a brat lol, he just matured a bit, his Dad raised him well. If he didn't met his Dad he will probably be a headache of society coz he have the qualities of a villain 아리안네

    THE GAG

Rei January 5, 2025 8:01 pm

MC's a cool guy.

Rei December 21, 2024 5:42 am

I read somewhere that apparently in the novel all of his family ultimately dies and Tess later on too. Is this true? I need to know so I can prepare my heart for that.

I want to believe the person that left that post was just playing but if not... (T_T)

    Mike December 22, 2024 5:26 am

    Most people die yes, the mother and sister live, the king and queen of the human and elf kingdom die, and most of the mercenary group except for like 1 or 2 .Tess is neither dead or alive she has some one else inhibiting her body. However this may change later I haven't been up to date with the novel.

    Mike December 22, 2024 5:29 am
    Most people die yes, the mother and sister live, the king and queen of the human and elf kingdom die, and most of the mercenary group except for like 1 or 2 .Tess is neither dead or alive she has some one else ... Mike

    Fuck forgot to put a spoiler
    IM SORRY FOR THOSE THAT SEE THIS IGNORE IT.

    Rei December 22, 2024 10:26 pm
    Most people die yes, the mother and sister live, the king and queen of the human and elf kingdom die, and most of the mercenary group except for like 1 or 2 .Tess is neither dead or alive she has some one else ... Mike

    Ah T_T

    This news saddens me, but thank you! When I read the chapter about the artist having looked forward to the War arc due to its darker storylines, I had a feeling the OP hadn't just been making stuff up... at least I know for sure now. Again, thank you.

    Jewel January 3, 2025 12:33 am
    Most people die yes, the mother and sister live, the king and queen of the human and elf kingdom die, and most of the mercenary group except for like 1 or 2 .Tess is neither dead or alive she has some one else ... Mike

    SORRY HOW TF THEY FIT ALLAT INTO ONE ARC??

    Thales of Miletus January 4, 2025 4:29 pm
    Most people die yes, the mother and sister live, the king and queen of the human and elf kingdom die, and most of the mercenary group except for like 1 or 2 .Tess is neither dead or alive she has some one else ... Mike

    I appreciate the spoilers, maybe I should read the novel too. Can I please have the link?

    Mike January 5, 2025 12:08 pm
    I appreciate the spoilers, maybe I should read the novel too. Can I please have the link? Thales of Miletus

    Sure thing I use this website, it's free haven't had to pay or anything when I used it. It's been awhile so I'm not sure if there are any changes.
    https://www.lightnovelhub.org/novel/the-beginning-after-the-end-web-novel-11110049

    Thales of Miletus January 5, 2025 6:22 pm
    Sure thing I use this website, it's free haven't had to pay or anything when I used it. It's been awhile so I'm not sure if there are any changes.https://www.lightnovelhub.org/novel/the-beginning-after-the-end-... Mike

    Thanks man

    Nah March 14, 2025 4:39 pm
    Most people die yes, the mother and sister live, the king and queen of the human and elf kingdom die, and most of the mercenary group except for like 1 or 2 .Tess is neither dead or alive she has some one else ... Mike

    Hi, how about the dragon? The dragon that bond with arthur. Does the dragon die?

    Mike March 14, 2025 8:17 pm
    Hi, how about the dragon? The dragon that bond with arthur. Does the dragon die? Nah

    EVEN MORE SPOILERS BELOW!!!


    No, however last I left off she became comatose and had to revert to a egg? like form as she used all her energy to help Arthur from dying in a later fight that o won't get into further detail as that's when the story takes a major turn.

Rei December 7, 2024 10:15 pm

No, I'm here too early. This is not a story to be read in parts. I need 50chapters I can binge at once. This is so good. From the very first panel I could tell it was going to be something really special.

Mori, Rider, Aia, the god-like aliens, the quality art, the growing mystery. Everything is *chefs kiss*

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