Lmao, this guy is so attentive yet inattentive. Must be mind boggling having a conversation with a guy that turned away and barely responding
I think I disliked it when i meant to like it im super sorry :((
It’s fine!
The comments make me not want to read the update XD... Well, I was already on the fence about continuing this because there doesnt seem to be much of a plot and I was only here for the cute kid.. I'll come back later and y'all will update me on if this story goes anywhere besides sex. XD
Somehow, I feel like he’s not on the same page...
But I’m also not sure what page he’s even on
U wrote out my thoughts exactly (￣∇￣")
Lmaoo, this sums up everything so perfectly
Sorry, sir prince, but werent you the one complaining about her inability to give a final (death) blow? Also, are you telling me none of those bodies on the ground are dead?
surely one out of those many bodies is bleeding to death
I am so sorry that i accidentally dislikes your comment
Maybe he’s talking about the death of an innocent? IDK. There’s no way she didn’t kill anyone, but that guy is being controlled so that’s the only reasoning I can come up with.
She said at the beginning of the fight that she couldn't sense any life energy from Enas' father OR any of his knights. Basically, he and his men are lifeless puppets.
she maybe good with a sword, but she was swarmed, there was too many of them to hold back on
MC being taught the norms of average highschools is adorable, hilarious, and sad at the same time. His general airheadedness is so cute.
Lmao, I was suspicious about the amount of pretty female hunters in the parties, and after the first 3-ish chapters, I'm guessing that's the set-up for the whole "goblins trick and rape" thing. Pretty gorey but I like the storyline so far, so I guess I'll keep reading
i just reread this and forgot most of it, so that first chap.... Wow, it was creepy and he was fucking a disembodied torso and neck of a demon, but the weirdest thing is that the art is so pretty. 'Beautiful gore' really messes with your mind XD
I'm here for the child cuteness and the funny guards BUT
The TATTOO - WHAT IS THAT? WHY? I mean, I guess its not super ugly, but straight-up big leopard print dots? starting on one butt cheek and just....what? I feel like that might be something I'd get as a stripper specifically to go with my slit/open-thigh dress. Eve then... I don't get it XD its just...there.
The 2nd ML guy - happens to be mafia-involved, but is a teacher, but is also a cold-hearted fuck-friend who likes public sex. reminds me of that super cool tattooed 2nd ML with the baby face from Legs that Won't Walk.
Logic? - Be his mom, but don't have a deep relationship. Sir, I call BS.
Basically, its random horny people and a cute kid.hmmm
"He beat up her bullies and took down a gang"
"She might be in danger"
What?? Make it make sense. Just kidding, I understsnd why his false past would be concerning but theyre really annoying at this point and theyre basically harassing him. Also, theyre probably the reason his sister got dragged in to the kidnapping. If I were him, i'd probably fuck them over just from annoyance. "if youre gonna accuse me of it, i might as well do it" XD
"If he was alive then he should have contacted you" -she says about the child who went down in a plane crash in a foreign country with a language he didn't speak (thats the story anyway. It seems possible that he might really not be her brother, which is sad, or he is and he just became a mercenary to survive).
"A brother that comes back to life to defeat his sister's bullies sounds like a fairy tale" -says the pretty girl with a loyal bodyguard (a knight and his lady lol)
"You should let them catch up without interfering" ' bro, what if he needs to buy something from the corner store? You're gonna block him from the store
Anyway, I LOVE THIS (even if the last 5ish chapters were about the body guard and girl repeatedly mentioning how suspicious MC is as if he's out to get them). Despite my complaints, I dont even hate them, I just find them somewhat ridiculous and not very subtle at handling the situation