AHHHHH MY BOOOOY
OHHH SO THAT'S THE LUCAS I'VE READ FROM THE SPOILERS IN THE COMMENT
Give me spoilers pl
This is a level of writing quality someone who barely reach 16 would write. Or this is some unfiltered AI generated story writing. Because my god its so bullshit. Not only do the characters suck but the plot overll is just BS
Ngl it made me not want to watch the drama because it ticked me off that I can't read the webtoon instead. Hoping they reconsider after the whole series is done airing or when enough fans demanded for the webtoon's full version
Great art with promising plot and characters. But I'm getting this vibe that all the characters who wrong her were made to make them the most evil shitty being with no reason at all. Ngl kinda make the enemies shallow because they were created to be hated with little to no backing as to why they are acting this way. And while some may argue that we are only 8 chapters deep at this point. I'm complaining because the story felt like it already tried to show so much but with little to nothing of substance that can make the whole story actually interesting
This is exactly what I was thinking. Like how can someone be so inconsiderate and evil towards another human? Maybe they have dehumanized her to a point where they only consider her as a object that holds assets like money and all? As for the husband, I'm starting to think that him taking everything lightly is a part of his personality but also he doesn't understand the weight of his actions. Somebody needs to put it into perspective for him, but he'd probably just ignore it like he did when Leticia tried to put it in perspective.
I really hope, at least the mistress amount to something more. It seemed like she planned this out for a long time. Maybe she's sorta like the villainess/witch from "The Second Life of a Trash Princess" and she brainwashed everyone?
Not really no. There are many cases of women and their families getting exploited by the groom and his family even in modern times. So I don't really find it that wierd. In many asian cultures, dowry is a thing so oftentimes groom's side views marriage as a chance for financial gains and the bride is reduced to a mere hostage or channel that is used to siphon more money from her family after marriage. Although the story is victorian era based, the idea still applies ig since there were marriages for alliances and gains there too.
Her step-mother is also understandable bc she married a man who had money and a daughter he loved a lot. The man squandered all his money for his daughter and her husband and ended up dead with debt that she had to pay off. If she had not remarried, she'd be in streets thanks to MC n her in laws. I'd hate MC too if I were in her step mother's shoes. From her pov, MC brought nothing to her life except for ruination, its harsh but true.
Yes, I read something like that somewhere. The mistress brainwashed the husband thus he is like 'I knew what I had to do once I met her'. However he was a dick wad since before their marriage as shown in the chap where they get married. I agree with the blondie that she should leave him asap. I would have tbh, she was just too blinded ig.
As far as I can remember the FL was the one with money, the other dude was a novue riche of some kind due to the support of the FL's Dad. Which made the interraction of the characters between each other even more confusing.
And there really are only two possible reason for it.
1. Side chick is a witch or something that brainwash everyone.
2. They are just made to be hateful because author doesn't have any creativity to write characters with sense.
Regardless, so far I'm smelling lazy character story writing, that I am hoping not true because art's gonna be wasted
People really do be trying to pull a morale high ground with the age gap when this is obviously very focused on demn sex scenes.
Then they can leave out the scenes of him blushing remembering him when he was 5 years old
Or stop asking for morals in a literal porn manga?
This isn't your average porn doe it's clearly trying to build upon its characters so criticism is valid for that.
No offense but the "writing" part of it is so obviously used just to fuel the sex scenes.
It provides some context to the characters, but is that the focus? No
They had a misunderstanding in the beginning = leads to make up sex
Brother visiting = leads to either hidden sex or more intense sex due to holding for so long
In other words it all boils down to the sex scenes which is the core of the manga.
And once a series is a sex focus one, its kinda free real estate, because at the end of the day the other info are there to fuel kinks of different people, which is demonstrated on the number of common tropes that was presented so far
That's a bad take as lot of these stories that are mainly just sex for example full volume can still tell meaningful stories and doesn't mean pedophilia can just be ignored. This technically is a manga not fully a hentai so I'm going to criticise it like a normal story
Whoever are there publishing these garbages. Hire decent writers and pay them livable wages, not hire a random 12 yr old in the internet to write shit like this. Goodness fucking gracious
How tf does this have 9.1 rating. The FL is a literal jumble of inconsistencies in character story telling.
She is from the modern world where killing is against our moral principle. BUT she was able to somehow kill a person with one slash at minute one that she arrive in this new world.
I dunno if the goal is to create a gap moe of her being strong but being a bit ditzy. But I don't how or where but the connection between some of the characterestics she shows is just so out of bounds from the realms of reality of common sense that it makes her character and the whole story confusing and off putting.
Overall if this is your first transmigration story thing. Or u just want junk food story I understand the appeal. But goddamn there is still better ones out there
I know, right ?! How come she’s so confortable being a murderer, or a lord in a feodal world ?
how come she has the ability to do all of that ? it's so weird
I always love Carcel ofc because he's hot asf. But he is such an amazing person for Iñes too. I reread it all over and it shows how much care he has to her that he easily picks up what's going on her mind and the reason behind her actions. I love that he's created to have an actual personality and doesn't feel like the usual ML nowadays where they're sole purpose is to dote and cherish the FL with little to no understading on the character's inner dilemma.
AHHHHH!!!
And dont get me started on Iñez, such an amazing FL. I smelling angst, drama and romance and I cant wait to ride along the journey again
Horrible. Whoever mfs rated this shit so high to get this hellhole of a story this high of a rating. Go back to wattpad or something
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