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at first i really liked this story, even though Lili was a child for a decent part of the story, it didn’t feel like it was dragging on (which so many stories do now) but after they entered school i feel like things have felt suuuper rushed. it’s hard to form any connections or even care for some of these relationships when we’ve only been told like two sentences about it.
i honestly understand Lili & wanting to separate herself because she’s scared, but is trying to leave her sister really the best thing to do? at this point, shes been in this body for 10+ years & she acts different from the OG lili, yet her sister still loves her. i understand her abandonment issues, but it’s frustrating because even when people show they care for her, she still can’t seem to trust them. i just need to see way more character development from her, i feel like she hasn’t changed at all since she was a kid.
now on to the male leads. for one, i don’t know if it’s just me, but im not too sure why all of these guys fell in love with her? i feel like when she was young she was a huge tease & could be viewed as rude/mean, so i wonder what made these guys fall in love with her?? i really wish she would just reject the guys she doesn’t like rather than just say nothing. if you know josh likes you, why not at least acknowledge it and say something to him instead of making him suffer??
also, i wonder, would she still feel this way about josh if aiden or carlisle were still talking to her during all of these years? kind of feels like she’ll just choose josh since he was there? i don’t have a fav male lead though, i actually like all of them… kind of not even interested in the romance at this point & just want her to grow as a character.
anyone know where this story will go now?? i feel like there’s no overarching plot besides her guilt towards her sister… like there hasn’t been any villain for a minute now so i’m curious as to what will happen??
BUT!! cedric & lia forever!! they are seriously so cute and definitely the best couple in this story lol