After I Left You
18
Seriously speaking (cuz I’m in a serious mood reading it) it sucks that the ML doesn’t suffer more, like the shit the mc went through was heart breaking and I felt he needed more time to himself before the make up. It's also really annoying that the doctor and ML are treating the mc like a game, I hate that those two themes of mc and ml relationship problems is getting even less weight of importance cuz of the dumb attempted love triangle. U know what I realised they do a lot of talking rather than showing so the rekindling the relationship feels too rushed and flimsy, like the weight of the problem is much larger than the aftermath. Also pisses me off that ppl keep pushing the mc, yh for the better but Jesus Christ give him some time, the pacing sucks.
BUT if I’m not taking it seriously and just consume this trashy content like I do all the other ones then I would enjoy it. So future me just don’t take it seriously.
Imprison The Flower
No, bla bla bla I get it the ML is a different timeline one and is "different". What I hate is how annoyingly inconsistent it is. Characters such as the twins are used as comic relief and also such fucking cunts they're literally better off dead and so is the ML. The mc just ends up going back to the ML? Even after all that trauma?! Like bitch I get he has a plan but at least make it difficult for him to even go near that cunt cuz with the amount of shit he was put through it ain't just gunna be the code word that's triggering, it's also the face of the abuser himself. When the mc went "I was nearly fooled again", he's acting like he just got cheated on when the shit he went through was so much worse than that, literally anyone in his situation would have killed themselves. The fast passing makes it worse, it's just bad at dealing with heavy shit.
Murderer Llewellyn's enchanting dinner invitation