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It was so good... only to flop at the end. Like, wtf kinda forced ending is that. We could've continued on for at least 40 more chapters.
Could've had Karyan confess he only likes Jerry as a friend- deleting him from routes.
Could have had us learn that the system is another entity but is effected by Jerry's feelings or smth.
Could've had Jerry become powerful enough to also mess with the system- I would've liked it if he could've healed his body eventually by finding something or by actually turning the sensitivity back to normal- allowing him to sense things- probably allowing him to sense the mana around him and maybe he could learn to control it.
I would've liked seeing him get stronger- and I like the idea of Karyan ending up as emperor or king or whatever- but we should've more clearly explored Ilya's position and what he will do in the future.
I would have loved it if Jerry helped Ilya find his own passions- and be close to other ppl too.
I just... I wanted more build up. I wanted an actually suspenseful thing- and I wanted the kiss scene to be stunning and planned out by Ilya secretly or smth and actually in a rose garden or whatever. I would have loved that.
A build up and Jerry learning to accept the world he's in- and that maybe the system does not control everything but is instead just a seperate entity, predicting possible futures from its own 'coding' of who are suitable to be 'targets.'
Also, they talked about Jerry like he'd done this before- so I would have loved him regaining his memories and he learns he maybe has been in a loop of this world maybe getting bad endings and restarting over and over- maybe he fears Ilya for a bit, then comes to accept this Ilya is different.
I wanted to see what his life before entering this world was like- they built that up yet never showed us anything from his past in his previous world. Did the previous world even exist, or was it some ploy by the system? So many questions left to be answered dude.