BigBanana's Topics (116)

It was hot, kind of, first chapter... but... the progression is way too quick... and it just feels very much toxic... and I mean... Its still okay, but I don't really like it.
If they took more time, and they actually got to know each other and the setting was a bit different I would enjoy this quite a bit.
Like, 3 chapters is not enough.
I think it should have had 5 - 7 chapters and more progression and character development.
Also what kinda bullshit is that 'he was trying so hard from the beginning' bullshit. He raped you bro... Like... uhm?
He isn't even listening to you at all and yet you like it?
Toxic. I don't like the last 2 chapters.
Even the last half of first chap was crappy.
Like, leave the classroom sex for when you actually know each other properly lol
Yes, it was hot, but very crappy tbh plot wise, I never really got attached to the characters at all & there isn't much redeemable about the student. Like...?
Just saying, needed more character build up for him, I swear dude.

Mm, I like.
Leader looks so pretty too, like dayum.
Can't wait to see what happens.

I like it & hate it at the same time.
Any better translations, btw?
Because this was kinda crap translation wise, tbh.

I want more. I have a feeling there will be angst... and I like it.

I like it, If there is angst I will probably enjoy...
but also... well, first, pacing is too quick...
but other than that... I can't... Gahaha... why did dog man thrust his fingers into his mouth to put meds in there? Like... you can just throw em in there...
Dudee? loll
Dieing. So funny to me.

Ngl, Kinda hot.
A little fucky wucky but hot.
Progression maybe a bit too quick...
but... its hot though lol

Dude is fucked up, entire thing is fucked up, no after care? Disappointment... still hot though, lol... I'm apparently also fucked up. ¯_(ツ)_/¯
Wouldn't like this if it was a real life thing... also I just fuckin hate those porno things where a person's life gets ruined... but this particular one makes sense.
Mans kills people, like... bad dude... I think I can vibe...
but if it was IRL I... dunno... lol
I dunno what mafia man *doo! doo doo doo!* did to deserve this but I bet it was deserved.

K can we just-

Plot: The Princess Wishes To Die Peacefully!
And so she did, she died, wOw-

Literally just a one-shot

Please?

I expected the unicorn-
I knew this would happen-
Finds random horse-
OF COURSE
UNICORN (Pegasus?)

I Feel like Astelieu, considering he showed a certain amount of remorse, even if only because he cares for/enjoys swordsmanship, could be a redeemable human being.

Honestly, feels more like he bein dragged into shiz by his brother so I feel a certain amount of pity for him and feel like he can be forgives-ez if properly tries-ez.

Balzac feel like stubborn idiot who would refuse to change no matter what, maybe I am wrong tho, I dunno.

Anyway,
Dood walkin like "THIS IS PURE FAVORITISM, AND YOU KNOW IT" was fekin ridiculous,
honestly, he is truly a disgraceful excuse of a father figure,
the absolute fekin dumbass.
Gonna get himself shat on so hard-
He betta' get a Spanking-