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from Morohtar December 20, 2023 12:58 am
Somewhat of a review, no spoilers tho.
It's honestly sad that despite the detailed review of the male leads past, people still don't understand how heavily damaged he is and how normal his behavior actually is. :'D
I can only say: Do not blame him. people do not magically grow out of their trauma (I mean ACTUAL trauma, not the self-diagnozed, social media kind btw). It takes AGES to fix these kinda issues, with help of a professional, which this man clearly never had. So his behavior is very realistic as these kinda people will learn to copy but do not comprehend. And if you haven't learned something, naturally you cannot just do it.
Sadly the author doesn't put this all to use as well as it could be. After revealing his past there is barely any learning to be had, which is needed for these characters to work well in a story. Then again, the story has some big issues with random scene jumps and chapters feeling disconnected to the point of it feeling like there is a missing chapter inbetween each upload (which bothers me ALOT btw).
I like the base plot but the results of this comic are a bit on the weak side for me. The immersion isn't quite there, the story is too rushed and feels like a rough draft being turned into a comic and the story is (for me) a tad bit too common and predictable.
The translations are fine but sometimes I think there were things wrongly translated and do not make much sense the way they are written. But it's not too much of a problem really.
It's an okay read I'd say, but if you've read a good hundred high quality comics it might be more in the average to low tiers in terms of writing and art alike (art isn't bad, but sometimes inconsistent with anatomy).
Give it a try but I'm not interested enough to keep reading and I wouldn't recommend it either. Just not up to my standards, but maybe you can have a good time with it! Have fun~