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I felt like the last few chapters were rushed. One chapter the chef left to work abroad for a year and the next chapter he’s back. Like there could have been some chapters of them having a long distant relationship. I would have also like to see them have dinner with the parents after they’ve become accepting. Also the second couple barely had a story. It would’ve been great if the seme would have had a reunion with the guy he slept with back in high school. Maybe that could’ve helped him decide on pursuing a relationship with the red haired guy. I hope there’s a few extra chapters focusing on the second couple because so far they just felt like filler scenes for the main story.