JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 30, 2025 3:24 am

I'm a tolerable person. There are only some stories i couldn't handle and usually itd be for the reason that its either too f ed up or angsty to the point of no return. But this story, no matter how many times i tried to get into it, its just not for me. Particularly because i hold the view that LAWYERS are supposed to be the ones with the most common sense but leewon's 'lawyer-ism' was so miniscule that made me even doubtful, is he even a lawyer?

I didn't like the story from the get go though due to this. During the fresh time of the relationship, suddenly the prospective lover man shot you not once, not even twice but thRICE. And despite the constant abuse of power, as a LAWYER, he still chose to be with his abuser.

Now ik some of yall have been caesar's defender/apologists yada yada, idc come at me without understanding this perspective first and I'll have you BLOCKED. Saying that he's a well written complex character is a bit over the top. He's mid at best and you can call my standards high because it is. If the story doesn't go into the details of the dark triads and psychopathy explicitly, paired with each important characters' portrayal of the gravity of the matter, then iTS MID TO DECENT at best. Why? Go and read TBMD if you haven't yet then or lets dissect and discuss about Seungho cause THAT man right there, is one of the most well written complex character.

Overall for the story, I'd call it a dark romance but not the kind of story I'd settle into. I think i would be less irritated if leewon was just an ordinary man but ffs they had to be a lawyer. Yall can talk about how realistic caesar is acting but leewon my guy, its rather disappointing. But with all the sex scenes to amend their relationship, that just added more into the negative points. Its like the LAW to have sex to finally be vulnerable. It satiate the readers' thirst but tbh this can never best solution all the time.

This is a constructive criticism perspective, i do not come here to look for a brawl of words or anything. You either take it and leave it or take it and ponder again. Anything of hostility will be replied briefly and blocked, not because I'm afraid or anything but i just value my time and peace than to participate in a dispute. Thx.

    Otaku9847 January 30, 2025 3:38 am

    Pop off, I love this story but after reading what you said your sooooo right!!!

    sapphics lover January 30, 2025 3:39 am

    ppl calling him a complex and well written character is really pissing me off, hes not.
    the author doesnt explore his mindset at all, there is no depth to him as a character.

    Tkoth January 30, 2025 3:49 am

    What is TBMD ?

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 30, 2025 3:57 am
    What is TBMD ? Tkoth

    The Beast Must Die

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 30, 2025 3:57 am
    Pop off, I love this story but after reading what you said your sooooo right!!! Otaku9847

    Im glad you can see it

    sapphics lover January 30, 2025 3:57 am
    What is TBMD ? Tkoth

    the beast must die
    it has the best depiction of a psychopath ive seen in bl

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 30, 2025 3:58 am
    ppl calling him a complex and well written character is really pissing me off, hes not. the author doesnt explore his mindset at all, there is no depth to him as a character. sapphics lover

    I try to be understanding as possible, its probably 'their first time' analyzing a literature work just like caesar's first time falling in love☠

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 30, 2025 4:00 am
    the beast must dieit has the best depiction of a psychopath ive seen in bl sapphics lover

    Fr the author actually made in depth research on psychopathy before they started writing. Blind play ngl portrays psycho/sociopathy quite well too tho i didnt read the entire thing, i heard its good enough

    sapphics lover January 30, 2025 4:02 am
    I try to be understanding as possible, its probably 'their first time' analyzing a literature work just like caesar's first time falling in love☠ JaysAndJakeSupremacy

    lmao

    sugarplum January 30, 2025 4:39 am

    PREACH! I honestly don't mind this story but I completely get you. I would just say that even tho Lee won "chooses" to be there, he really doesn't because he has no other choice. When he tried leaving the first time, he got shot, kidnapped, raped, and almost froze to death. The fact the both his lover AND his father are in the mafia, not just in the mafia but actual mafia bosses with the former being retired but he still has A LOT of influence. He can't leave even when HE WANTED TOO. First time his dad gave him a pass but Caesar being a fucked up weirdo did even give him a chance to leave. Now with both the dad and Caesar, there is no chance in HELL lee won is ever leaving Russia without either of them knowing or getting their permission. ( ̄へ ̄)

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 30, 2025 11:28 am
    PREACH! I honestly don't mind this story but I completely get you. I would just say that even tho Lee won "chooses" to be there, he really doesn't because he has no other choice. When he tried leaving the firs... sugarplum

    The circumstances really doesnt side with him but tbf, its all on author's decision afterall we readers can only speculate the what ifs and what nots. But its alg ig

JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 28, 2025 5:23 am

I genuinely want an au where yeonwoo died and Keith refusing everyone just to be celibate and single till death. Would be a good angst lmao

JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 27, 2025 8:22 pm

THAT POOR FUCKING CHILD RIENKSDKSDKSBDK besided that the author's art improved a lot BUT THEY NEVER SEEM TO RUN OUT OF PSYCHOPATHIC LOVE STORY HUH

JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 6, 2025 11:50 pm

I finished the novel back in July 2022 but i can say that i do not remember reading anything significant related to romance. Other than Munku, yeowun literally never looked at anyone else so y'all, keep reading and ride it out. If there was any harem at all, even I would've long lashed out and stopped reading but nah the story is full of action and less to nonexistent of those things you guys are worried about.

    ParisTea January 10, 2025 6:48 pm

    So does he marry white haired girl or nor, ik he doesn't like her but if he marries then it's a harem in my eyes still and I personally don't want anything to do with it.

    ParisTea January 10, 2025 6:49 pm

    Wait nvm he does marry her.

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 10, 2025 7:08 pm
    So does he marry white haired girl or nor, ik he doesn't like her but if he marries then it's a harem in my eyes still and I personally don't want anything to do with it. ParisTea

    He did yea but anything about marriage was glazed over in the novel. If there were any, then i wouldve remember because itd be the only significant plotline that involves romance/harem/marriage. While it may be true that the story does have harem, itd be insulting to mark it as a harem story though cuz its not like that at all. So give it some more thoughts, its pure action on Yeowun's progress to become the strongest.

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 10, 2025 7:12 pm
    So does he marry white haired girl or nor, ik he doesn't like her but if he marries then it's a harem in my eyes still and I personally don't want anything to do with it. ParisTea

    Also, he married her out of obligation and tbh itd be even more ass of him as a man(with the last string of humanity he has left) if he didn't. Imo it's nothing to be worried about, the plot buildups where he gets stronger and stronger were more appealing than everything else

    ParisTea January 10, 2025 7:20 pm
    Also, he married her out of obligation and tbh itd be even more ass of him as a man(with the last string of humanity he has left) if he didn't. Imo it's nothing to be worried about, the plot buildups where he g... JaysAndJakeSupremacy

    I know but like just the slight hint of harem throws me off so dang bad, idek why it's this serious for me it just is I want to see he progress but Ik when I see the white hair girl pop up on the screen I'm gonna get heated so I might aswell save myself from the stress because that outways my happpiness that I would've had reading the story.

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 10, 2025 7:39 pm
    I know but like just the slight hint of harem throws me off so dang bad, idek why it's this serious for me it just is I want to see he progress but Ik when I see the white hair girl pop up on the screen I'm gon... ParisTea

    Lmaoo issoke you're real for that. But if it makes you feel like you can continue, yeowun doesnt give a damn about her and if anything, Munku is the only one in his eyes as he should u can be rest assured. Though what gets me fr heated is the fact that the romance in here is almost nonexisting iNCLUDING our mAin couple

    ParisTea January 10, 2025 7:41 pm
    Lmaoo issoke you're real for that. But if it makes you feel like you can continue, yeowun doesnt give a damn about her and if anything, Munku is the only one in his eyes as he should u can be rest assured. Thou... JaysAndJakeSupremacy

    Dang

JaysAndJakeSupremacy January 3, 2025 6:48 am

NAH WE'RE GONNA SAY THANK YOU TO JK FOR SAVING DAN NOW? NAHHHHWHS THIS IS FOUL

JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 21, 2024 7:17 pm

In the Korean ver, it translates to 'mental age' which is referring to the persona's lack of opportunity to mature mentally aka is innocence and naive. Also mental age≠physical age. The prev translation: 'literal child' was definitely an error cuz, to make a point, you can be 60 with a mental age of a 15 year old again.

JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 17, 2024 5:06 pm

Yo eunhabitch, i hope you rot and die a lonely death cuz u got me screaming in silence and profanity towards the MC with my roommates trying to sleep. It felt so unnecessary cuz the angst was TOO DAMN MUCH TO A POINT I WAS MORE FRUSTRATED THAN FEELING ANSGT-ED

JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 14, 2024 6:18 pm

Mincheol, get the fUCK away from me PLS, im putting a restraining order if i see even one mincheol-to-be is approaching. Nah, you're not WELCOMED at ALL.

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 14, 2024 6:20 pm

    +the grovelling arc better be excruciating for this mincheol and every mincheols out there. Even death would spare them too nicely.

JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 3, 2024 12:37 pm

NAHH i was just ranting about how we're gonna get JK's suffering arc AND THE WAY HE FIGURES THINGS OUT IS NOW IS TOO QUICK NA??? MAKE IT LONGER BRUH HE NEEDS TO GROVEL MORE.

JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 2, 2024 5:06 pm

Re-reading this cuz i want to imagine how Jaekyung would be if he finally becomes a changed man.........its mission impossible.

Honestly, sweet Jaekyung sounds cringy☠ and even if he's gonna change for the better, he'd probably be the dominant caring partner instead, which is imo a lil too cliche and boring ngl.

    Lalaa December 2, 2024 11:56 pm

    I came back to check how bad the ml was in this one to compare the 2 Ngl i just cant picture jaekyungs bitchy face to ever express any affection or care towards anyone. Or like blushing, touched or any positive emotion. Bro is personification of Anger (from the disney movie) but even Anger has more heart than jaekhyung he should win 1st place in most hated ml ever.. And deservsed an arc with only suffering

    Sry for the random long reply.. I just could complain abt this dude forever but cant rant abt it with anyone as I could never tell anyone that i'm reading this kind of yaoi(/TДT)/

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 3, 2024 12:02 am
    I came back to check how bad the ml was in this one to compare the 2 Ngl i just cant picture jaekyungs bitchy face to ever express any affection or care towards anyone. Or like blushing, touched or any positiv... Lalaa

    No worries cuz so fockin real i feel like JK being sweet would be a real JK(joke) though given how the author works, i just dont think we can get the suffering arc for too much(I HOPE WE DO THO I WANT THE ANGST TOO)

    Truthfully saying, i can tolerate a lot of bullshit ml if given their past and upbringing but JK would be hard asf for me to do so and we're for sure expecting chapters regarding his past.

    Lalaa December 3, 2024 12:26 am
    No worries cuz so fockin real i feel like JK being sweet would be a real JK(joke) though given how the author works, i just dont think we can get the suffering arc for too much(I HOPE WE DO THO I WANT THE ANGST... JaysAndJakeSupremacy

    Yah I'm feeling you Like that dudes behavior is unexcuseable, he's even showing the most possible bare minimum type of respect to his hyungs. very curious what kind of messed up back story author is gonna pull to justify his shetty personality... But as you said shes probably not gonna drag suffering arc on as much as Dan's suffering

    JaysAndJakeSupremacy December 3, 2024 12:47 am
    Yah I'm feeling you Like that dudes behavior is unexcuseable, he's even showing the most possible bare minimum type of respect to his hyungs. very curious what kind of messed up back story author is gonna pul... Lalaa

    Itd better be 10× more traumatic so i wont hate him this much

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