beta
It's great and all but it's moving way too fast, it would be perfect if it goes a bit slower, like- the interaction with the prince can last longer and more detailed before the engagement. Well i prefer all the interaction to be more detailed also, huge error appears when the girl bully the fl, being so easy to convinced while she hate her that much, things were escalating way to fast it gets "cliche"
Well, this is just my opinion though. More details will make it more interesting and less cliche, when things process too fast it lose its charm and becomes cliche. All in all i don't dislike this.