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But it feels like there are knots that were left unattended. Don't get me wrong, it's a great story but it just feels like there is more to it than it has rn. Like there is a potential to make the ending much more satisfying than it is right now. For example getting a proper closure for Lindsay's memory loss(?), her inability to bear a baby and also her childhood, AND EUTHIGEN!!! My boy needs a proper ending as well.