
Why do yall ask if it’s an age gap when it’s clear as day that it is. Go read something else, you don’t have to read this.

I agree, when something isn't my taste I instantly go back, rather than wasting my time complaining about it. After living through the Wattpad hype (all the CEO boss, Mafia boss, and Werewolf Alpha) almost nothing can phase me. And it's a Yakuza story, however, this probably will show more of the slice-of-life side instead of the active criminal side.

Plots like this are so silly because why would Yeomin even be upset lmao. Unless the artist is going to tell us that Taesoo was in charge of said subsidiary and made them delay payments. Which will be stupid on its own. Stories like this already have enough drama going on, no need to add something stupid to it just to drag it out.

Surprisingly enough knowing yeomin personality even if that was the case (but it can’t be cause that was 20 years go) he wouldn’t even be mad. This guys doesn’t even get mad when it’s actually vile things that are being done to him because he doesn’t think es worth any better (and that hurts so muc). So yeomin being mad would be really out of character and I hope the author knows it

How do you mistake an 11 year old for a 17-18 year old? Easy actually. Why would a child think another child would be lying about their age?
I still think this plot device is stupid though. Like how desperate are the mangaka these days that they have to jump through all these hoops and convoluted plot points to have a HS boy dating a grown man?
The five year age gap isn’t even that bad, just let them meet again as 20/25 instead of this nonsense?

The way people on this website have no problem absolutely insulting an artist’s style is crazy lol. Where are your comics then guys? You are reading this shit for free and illegally but feel entitled to make rude comments about the art? Everyone starts somewhere, stop being salty just because this artist got their story published and you didn’t.

Pacing in chapter 3 is really odd and makes an already bad situation look much worse. In a way, I can understand that the author probably intended the sex scene to come across differently, but Sakura just looks like a pushy loser that can’t understand that no means no. There isn’t enough dialogue or time to convince us that Haruto has sobered up, but I think the author wants us to believe he has? His reason for saying no is tied into his low self esteem and fear of disappointing others/committing, but there’s not enough substance to convey this so Sakura just looks like he’s forcing himself on Haruto. It also doesn’t help that Sakura is taking the very overdone “don’t let other guys do this” approach instead of just reassuring Haruto that he’s not disappointed in the slightest. Haruto ends the encounter feeling better about their relationship so it’s clear we aren’t meant to see this as an assault but it’s just written so badly that we have no choice but to take as it is. There’s also just way too much going on in this chapter. Sex, feelings reveal, trauma reveal, new character, Sakura’s major secret backstory???

The fact that he says the title in the actual story just makes me hate the cumbersome way they translated it even more. It flows so poorly and seems so needlessly wordy. How did they fumble “Can you kiss me first”? Even “You Should Kiss Me First” would have worked better. Hell I would even understand just “You need to kiss me first”.

UGH THIS!!! I loved how the unofficial translation phrased it "Can you kiss me first?". It is so romantic, flows so naturally, and matches with the rest of the beautiful dialogue of their confession. Was so upset when I read the "You should be the one to kiss me first." LIKE WHAT? WHO TALKS LIKE THAT?
Seongha’s genuine smile at the end made me so sad because we never get to see him smile so happily otherwise :(