Interesting plot.
However, something is lacking
Maybe pace , maybe too much shit to solve thrown to the MC all at once?
Anyway, will be continuing this
4 stars frome me for now<3
That makes sense for a game. You have like one main quest and side quests get thrown at you left and right. And while you're doing a side quest, another ten gets thrown at you. It's just a way to keep the players engaged and have stuff to do. But it does get overwhelming sometimes.
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That being said, she seems too lax in caring for her kid. No wonder he died everytime
I Loooove this one
A solid 5 stars for me
Best chemistry + good art + Best Ml who is soft , cold, loving, funny and able to COMmunicate + simple and short
It's a refreshing plot for me
ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Only pushing through because of Tes.
Like why???? Eucenielle??????
As much as I try, I can't root for her character （/TДT)/
Maybe I'm just too in love with Tes' devotion and obsession and willingness to give everything to Eu
BUT the way she keeps fumbling is NOT worth it for me ╥﹏╥
Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy was Carter's Kidnapping Child Grooming SA Imprisonment of A MINOR SWEPT UNDER THE RUG SOOOOOOO EASILY LIKEEEE?????!!!!
I know he did get the death penalty HOWEVER! Helena was captured for assuming 20 years! How I felt weak and helpless when I pieced together she was the victim （/TДT)/
Don't throw in such heavy topics if it is not gonna be returned with MUCH heavier sentence imo (yeah death is way too light)
Aside from that I actually enjoy reading it
Definitely could have been better but
We don't get much of these so
A hidden jem I sayヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
I have always loved possessive trope and this one Nailed it. Diana isn't a mary sue who is helpless and I mention that because I often see that trope(possessive x mary sue) which is not the best
Imo if badass fl, match with possessive ml!
PERFECT(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
But isn't Mary Sue a competent person? Like a flawless person in any sense overall not a helpless person?
I think they were trying to say the girl would always be the helpless weak type that we often see in any troupe. Be it bl or normal romantic stories. Correct me if im wrong tho
I Myself cut the onions
You're a monster if you didn't bawl your eyes out like I did
（/TДT)/
Bruhhhhhh I read it daylight, I don't want them to see me crying
Why does it feel like I'm reading from a narrator's pov
There's this wall that keeps me from being invested
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Fr, i think it's cause they're covering every lead's POV yet trying keeping too many mysteries