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I feel like I’m asking a redundant question but it’s the Prince the ML? I mean he’s on the cover so it’s not looking good… I’m assuming there’s no novel that’s super far ahead otherwise someone here would’ve confirmed (￣∇￣")
Obviously we would prefer anyone else… Mr long white hair… the beast dude in the dungeon… hell maybe even his half brother who came out of no where
You COULD argue the beast dude is the ML since he’s seen in the flash-forward in the beginning but the panels focus way to much on the Prince going after her, standing all mysteriously on the cliff side with his bow that my instincts as a veteran tell me…. Oh she totally ends up with this toxic guy as endgame huh?
Also fucks sake introducing the sister is such bad derailing writing (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ the only instance that would work is at the end of this story, and she uses whichever man she chooses to immediately kill her, as like a complete afterthought to her to show she’s grown as a character and become more than a shadow to her.
introducing the sister, especially this early, just makes things cluttered (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ she has enough adversity’s this just makes her more unnecessarily timid when she’s shown the slightest bit of growth
Sigh someone let me know if the ML isn’t the prince then maybe I’ll be back