May

The thing that URKed me (besides the whole r@pe scene action) was how easy the uke was convinced to get back together with the ML. The ML said that he banged the blue hair dude before they were “dating” but (correct me if I’m wrong) the ML and uke had gourmet dinner at a restaurant and also went to a movie together!!! All before that whole situation happened! Sure they fooled around while at the drive-in theater but I feel like that was a date? I feel like their relationship wasn’t as fully fleshed out as it was supposed to be.
And the whole second r@pey scene was nottt necessary, we know that the ML had like guards or something watching them, they could’ve stopped the whole thing but no the didn’t. Maybe it was to dramatize the story but why with a r@pe scene? And to note that happened like right before the ending so I don’t understand why they couldn’t have just took out that whole scene and end the story with some actual relationship development?
I liked the extras tho, the unproblematic second couple had a cute dynamic! I honestly liked their relationship more than the main couples. And the amusement part extra was super cute!
In all I feel like this could’ve been a good story, but a lot of the relationships felt hollow, even though the story starts off with the uke stating that he just wants a normal relationship where sex isn’t the forefront! It kinda feels like the author got tired by the end and just found a good place to stop

I don’t really have a problem with threesomes in stories, but that one just made me super uncomfy.
I think the problem was that Victor did it sort of in spite of Yohan because of the hand holding thing which is just ehh. I get that they are not in a relationship.
I don’t think Victor and Theon getting it on would have bothered me so much but when Victor realized that he wasn’t turned on by Theon he just called Yohan in knowing that Yohan would take the bait.

And I thought Theon was hot, but the fact that he continued doing stuff with Victor even though he wasn’t turned on just gives me creepy vibes. And after the whole event when Yohan and Theon were talking, it seems like Theon knows that Yohan has certain feelings about Victor but continued to say that he’ll pursue Victor. I just don’t like Theon, he gives very much pretty boy privilege attitude, with an after taste of get the HELL away from me!

Anyways, Yohan supremacy. I’d squeeze his honkers all day long if he were real and treasure his pure soul with my every fiber of life! He’s just a good golden retriever character that fills my being with immense happiness!!