This story is so convoluted and dramatic.
It constantly threatens confinement of the character but never goes through with it, it constantly reminds the reader of revenge but it doesn't have the balls to execute it. The story started out dark but that's not what the author wants to depict. The whiplash between cute and edgy is brutal y'all. What story did they take the original story from because I'd rather read that tragedy at this point just because NOTHING is happening in this "new" story the "author" is writing.
It's kind to call them romantic scenes. The main characters have the equivalent chemistry of a deflated balloon and a damp sock. The reason why is because their characterization is inconsistent, it's impossible to match them together when they're written to the writer's whimsy.
This is a story that's as wide as an ocean and as deep as a puddle.
She's dumb as shit.