beta
I mean, it didn't start thaaat bad. It had potential ig. The ending is too rushed, like, what about Jace? He just took two punches and that's it. Make him suffer more, idk??
Also I wanted to know a lot more about the brother. I feel so bad for him, I mean yeah he said and did many questionable things but I feel like he could've beem a better character. They just didn't work on him. (And I'm sorry to say that but, for me, he's the biggest smash of the entire story)
I have mixed feelings for the mc, I don't like him but at the same time I feel a little bad.
Reading the ending, all he had to do was shushing Jace one time and it all would've ended. I get why he's "traumatized" and don't blame him for that, but???
And Avery is too good for everyone, he deserves better bro.
And the names make me laugh so much. Eric Yoon?? Wtf is that (￣∇￣")
Unpopular opinion: I prefer looking at lightsabers instead of new drawn pps by random people
I mean, if they're from the author it's ok, and even someone draws them pretty good, but some are really-- bro
Omg same but for me it's more comfortable reading that way
I cant look at dick drawn they r so stupid and horrible
Frfr!!
And when it's comedy they kill me I swear, bc they even draw cute faces on them
Give me the little ghost pps
This!!
I mean, I'm not ashamed to look at drawn pps, but I swear- when they use a totally different art style I just stop reading
Some yaoi with priests and stuff like that?
Every genre is fine, and any kind of priest is too!
(But as always, no minors involved)
Thank you in advance!
Oh Ajin...the man you are