22 07,2024
The second couple is interesting and cute but the way the author is organizing their scenes with the main couple's scenes is just...its confusing! Like storytelling wise its disruptive and out of flow with the plot thats happening with our main couple, its like a jumpscare or sm. I think people would appreciate the second couple more if their scenes didn't interrupt all the breakthroughs we get with the main ones.
17 10,2023