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I can’t tell if you’re saying this is good storytelling or not and that makes me concerned…bc this is very much not that unique of storytelling

girl? so ur telling me this is good storytelling , where every 2 chapters there’s smut n shit . i hope this is satire

If you don't like smut and toxic content, don't read manhwa labeled as such, and then shit on it. That's why genres and tags exist. If you actually read the plot, you'll see it's not as bad as you're making it out to be. It might not be the best compared to what I've read but its one of the most decent one compared to new releases out today.

Some people enjoy that. Some people don't. My question is why are people, who are obviously complaining in the comments about the storytelling/characters, still reading the manhwa? Save yourself the hassle (and a rage comment) and read something that suits your taste.

Rape and all and yeah fucking the mc in front of someone else with him blindfolded and unaware of the same. Well sounds pretty decent. And i really guess you need to read something that's actually decent before calling this "pretty decent". Because I really doubt your definition of decent

I like dan.. except for the fact that they portrayed him too weak and i like heesung and potato too. So I need to read what's going on to know where they'll stand in the next season.

I already knew about the toxicity going in. That’s not the thing I was talking about. I’m saying what plot??? Bc literally it’s just gets job —> rape —> angry man who doesn’t apologize —> cycle repeats back to rape. If that’s what you’re calling “decent plot” boy you have NOT read enough stories lmaoooo

Because its fiction. People can differentiate between reality and cartoon drawings.

I would have totally agreed with you if the op wouldn't have called this one realistic and a good writing.

To each their own I guess :/ personally I think the story telling is engaging but is very commonly seen in yaoi manhwas.

It appears there's a misunderstanding. While the work is tagged as rape, I interpret it differently, considering that Dan consented to the arrangement with the seme. Although I can't recall if all instances were consensual, that's not my main focus. I'm discussing the decency of the storyline within its genre, not comparing it to other works like "Under the Cherry Blossom." What's truly frustrating is how people, not necessarily you, harass the author and give it a low rating simply because they dislike the toxicity inherent in the genre.

Toxic genre = Toxic genre
I dont get why people are so mad when the comic is all about being toxic.

I'm confident I've read enough. Over the years, I've delved into a variety of genres, including BL and novels, so I can discern what makes a good story. Regarding "Jinx," I wouldn't label it as the worst; it's decent. If you've truly gone through the entire comic, you'd recognize there's a depth to the characters' stories, except perhaps for the Seme, whose backstory may unfold in season 2. Again, I stress that within the context of the toxic genre, "Jinx" stands as a decent example. Comparing it to other genres would miss the point I'm making.

I can agree to this because its a critique not a proper critique but I respect that, thats your opinion. However, it's frustrating when people who are aware that the genre as toxic and still continue to complain about it being excessively toxic.

?? uke wasn't necessarily a stalker I feel like ur dragging that, he fell for the uke as a friend at first bc he was the only one who "handle" or know the truth behind his actual personality mabye its been a while for the seme to hear those words from someone else so it touched him the seme is pretty sensitive, then he started falling for him lil by lil ,they r both flawed characters who find comfort within each other we will probably learn more of their backstorys but calling out the uke for being "weird" is literally the purpose of why he struggles with his emotions

?? uke wasn't necessarily a stalker I feel like ur dragging that, he fell for the uke as a friend at first bc he was the only one who "handle" or knew the truth behind his actual personality mabye its been a while for the seme to hear those words from someone so it touched him the seme is pretty sensitive if u look at it, then he started falling for him lil by lil the seme is more open and quick to act on his emotions then the uke ,they r both flawed characters who find comfort within each other we will probably learn more of their backstorys but calling out the uke for being "weird" is literally the purpose of why he struggles with his emotions also I nvr understood the dildo situation does no normal adult have that around ? Like I get in the open was silly but ??!

I don't think their should be any reasoning or "weak reasons" to fall for someone

They've only hung out once, and their interactions have mostly been unpleasant. The Seme was even ready to kill him, for goodness' sake. Then, out of nowhere, after their first hangout, he quickly develops feelings for him? And to make matters worse, the Uke is essentially a stalker, which is a punishable offense.

Picture being stalked, then suddenly this strange stalker becomes your group mate, and you're forced to spend time with someone you've been trying to avoid. Then, out of the blue, this person starts creepily trying to read your emotions during vulnerable moments and sweet-talking you. Would you instantly fall in love with them? Let's even forget the stalking; let's say they're just a random person. Are you that susceptible to falling in love just because they said some basic things like "you're not a bad person"?

Even the Noona found it strange that the protagonist would leave something like that out in the open when expecting a visitor. If I had a straight friend coming over and we were alone, I'd feel incredibly embarrassed if they saw my dildo lying around, and the Seme even touched it, eww, that's so unnatural. In real life, touching something that goes into someone's butt is just not something people typically do.

i dont get why ppl are downvoting u, ur literally just factually right, the author set up the premise of a though and dark love interest and they made him into a puppy in like 10 chapters

No they've hung out alot yeah their interactions weren't the best but that's kinda the point is to built off development within the interactions especially bc the seme was finding it hard to open up to the uke bc he obv had a wall built up even after finding out the one person to find the truth about his personality was a "weirdo" like him, the uke stalking wasn't to the extreme as ur making it seem he did stare alot of front of the seme I think the uke was more pushy than anything which obv made the seme break ,bc he doesnt like ppl getting close to him he hates it ?? That's the point why he has this face smile 24/7 , lil by lil they started to talk way deeper tho I do agree it could've been dragged a lil longer but their feelings towards each other wasn't anything close to lazy writing or "moving on too quickly" theirs going to be more angst in their relationship it isn't going to be perfect and I do think the reason why the seme "fell so quickly" prob has to do w sum in his past but

Neither of them are puppy one just shows more emotion and is open than the other

Their initial meeting was pleasant but brief. However, the subsequent interactions primarily consisted of the Uke stalking the Seme. Are you suggesting that the Seme gradually falls in love with the Uke because of the stalking behavior? If so, that's poor writing. In reality, most people wouldn't fall in love with their stalker; they'd likely report it to the authorities.

I would have understood if the Seme misunderstood the Uke's reasons for stalking him. It would have been better if the Seme knew that he was merely being used as a reference for a script that the Uke was creating.

I think that's why the title is "Don't mix business with pleasure" and the seme is prob going to find out later on I think the uke is starting to falling for him actually but it's too late until the seme finds out the truth ...

That's the very beginning of the story were later on its settled ??! Roughly but settled the seme finally knew the uke intentions on why he was following him around and they talked it out , again I think ur taking the stalking to the extreme bc it was more trying to get his attention??!

Idk either, well people are entitled to their own opinions. :)

Did you get paid to post a hate comment, you're stupid, or you just want attention? Did you even read it properly? Why is your reading comprehension so flawed? Read it again please, I think you left your brain cells somewhere

Girl, did we read the same story????
Are u dumb?
Bffr

BAGSGSGGAGAGAGAG FR

While i don't agree with what the original commenter said either, still you didn't have to be this rude. Especially that they weren't being disrespectful in the slightest they were just stating their opinion.

???? that was the whole point of his character ???? dohu was following juheon in the first place because he also thought he'd be an interesting, dark character for his novel, but realized after a few conversations that he's just putting up a front because he believed his real self was unlovable. juheon's character is someone who just wanted to be told that he's still worthy of being loved even when imperfect and dohu was that person, that's why he fell so quickly.

you just summarized the whole thing so well and clearly. I think that's possibly the best way to put it

Dont worry babe
Action is getting near(〜￣△￣)〜

OH?????

Theres gonna be a “wrestling” match ughhhh and it is SPICYYYY

ARE YOU SERIPUS OH MY GODDOSNSOSNSKAM

im with you!! taejoo and yoon deserve to be together :(

In my opinion (totally not invaliding yours!) I think Yoon and Tae shouldn’t get back together. They have been each other’s whole world for the majority of their lives. They have kept themselves in their own bubble and not allowed anyone else in. Especially on Yoon’s part. He was lost in the beginning of the story for this very reason. Tae at least had more social skills it seems, but Yoon had none. This breakup forced both of them to grow. Growth that they couldn’t accomplish while together, especially on Yoon’s part. Kwon pushed Yoon to not only better his career, but himself. Something I believe Tae not only couldn’t, but wouldn’t want too. If they were to get back together, one or both would get hurt in the long run and they would resent each other. Yoon would either give up the job he loves or go back into the field once he’s healed. Tae would probably get mad and give him an ultimatum since he wouldn’t want to go through that pain again. I do hope they can get back to being good friends, but their time as lovers have come to a close.

It's a fact that Yoon grew so much as a person when they broke up but for me if two people love each other so much why do they have to be separated. Yeah, people might get hurt in the process but it will just be detrimental to both Tae and Kwon. Isn't it great that they've depended on each other since they were young? Isn't it ok for them to keep themselves in a bubble where they feel like they only have each other? It's not like Tae had been a bad example to Yoon, If I'm not mistaken Tae would encourage Yoon to do whatever he wants, he's probably against Yoon pursuing Journalism because he wants to protect Yoon from danger and I think it's a normal reaction for a partner. I believe Tae might not understand what Yoon currently wants but I believe Tae can be a better person for Yoon in the future and I think being together for a very long time is a good thing. Kwon should find a person who will love him like how Tae loves Yoon a person who will risk everything for him.

*It will be detrimental to both Tae and Kwon if they continue their relationship.

In my opinion, being in a relationship means you will be at peace and in love with your partner. If your partner goes to a warzone of course your partner will worry a lot. Even if Yoon and the other guy became a couple I'm sure he will feel the same way, no one wants your partner to be in danger. In a relationship, you should give and take. Tae doesn't ask that much, he just wants Yoon to stay out of the warzone. My mom loves to help people even if it will affect her mentally and physically, my dad and I hate that about her because we couldn't afford to lose her if she keeps damaging herself.

I totally get where you’re coming from and agree with some of your points. Though, I personally do not find it healthy to be consumed by your partner and your partner alone. That’s why I like Kwon getting Yoon to come out of his shell and learn to speak for himself. They each had such a hard time being their own support because they were used to giving the other that weight to shoulder. There’s nothing wrong with relying on someone, but when you haven’t learned how to care for yourself first, you end up like them crashing hard into this new reality. If I remember correctly, Tae even says to himself that he doesn’t have want to resent Yoon. I feel like at some point in their relationship, Yoon would have to choose between his job and Tae. Kwon understands the risk. He has experienced it firsthand. He will worry, but he would never tell Yoon not to go. He will be his anchor waiting for him to come back. Tae and Yoon will always love each other, but it will never be at the level it was before. Both have been too hurt by the other to go back to how they were before the story started.

I think you read another story. And wait for the flashback for more details.

Even if I go back, it's not the right thing to do to sleep with another person that is in love with you just because you kind of like him while you're deeply in love with someone else. It's OK if he sleeps with a person who's only for the sex.

the other person agreed and knows that he is in love with another. Ho- In knew that, very well. Is no innocent. He want fuck Chunwoo so bad, is so horny for him. And to forget someone he is in love with, you need someone else.