
J is kinda being overly jerky in this story. He sometimes played the villain in the other Erotic tales, but he generally did so to catch the stories villain for his collections. He seemed to genuinely like couples getting together in the other stories for the most part. Not sure what his hang up with this tale is :/ . (unless this story is a prequel to the other tales, and something happens here that changes his outlook for the other stories...)

I'd go further and say in this story he is the villain and it makes him seem like a hypocrite. He was never this bad before.

"Roses are red
And violets are blue.
One day we'll cruise down
Blood Gulch avenue
It's red versus red
and blue versus blue
It's I against I
and me against you
Violets are blue, roses are red
Living like this we were already dead
Hop in my car
It don't have any doors
It's built like a cat
It lands on all fours
My car's like a puma
It drives on all fours
Red versus red
Blue versus blue"
Sorry, couldn't resist :3
Everyone's together? That... that actually makes a HUGE difference. I started reading this thinking "why another version of this?" but NOW i'm interested in seeing where this will go!
I think it just follows the same plot of the corpse party movie - idk for sure but it had the same premise (all were together)