I can feel my feet.

Who wrote this? Seriously. That dude should have gone insane as that point.
It’s like a person just playing an MMORPG and feeling no pain that the actual character felt, and kept his ration.
I believe he would barely be rational at that point, after all that torture and time.
Sort of going murderous after coming back.

It’s clear that the writer lacks experience, and I’m not saying that he need to suffer to write about sufferance.
It’s that they lack writing experience in the first place, one should start first with something close to them, but even the start, the failure, the most human topic is just skimmed over like a grocery list of misery and failure.

Also- why is the archduke a member of the night watcher?!! I can’t- lmao
Is this the bad version of John Snow?! The evil timeline-(≧∀≦)