
Holy fucking shit!! I thought Tasogare Focus was enchanting and amazingly gorgeous and I could die happy knowing I've read a masterpiece but suddenly came this piece. I am floored and smitten to the extremes! I am in love with the art, angst and feelings portrayed in this story. It's so captivating watching them dance around each other and slowly uncovering their feelings for each other. That scene where they watch a film on the projector was glorious. The kiss was so perfect. I'll die happy a second time.
It's only the first half of the first chapter and I'm fucking wheezing!! How the fuck do you get pube stuck to your teeth?? That lonesome stray pube sticking out from his teeth was so hilarious I burst out laughing and scared my flatmates. Can't wait to read the rest of it!!