beta
I genuinely don’t think the author knows what she wants. The story definitely has potential but the mc’s motivations keep flip flopping and the other characters are pretty much 2D. You can give us a character plotting to gangrape another and then make their filler fluff. Had he been manipulative/love-bombing at the start at least we take away the “cuteness” of the relationship. Even now if you showed me the last few chps I would have never guessed that one is plotting revenge and the other is a pos.