Pacing is def an issue.. but wow. I really am in tears at the end of this chapter pure sisterly love is difficult to come by and this was so we'll written
Half a decade this has been going on... I got into two major relationships and broke up in the time, and this is not even close to ending are we at least midway???
SCRUMPTIOUS I LOVE WELL WRITTEN CHARACTERS WHO ARE ON OPPOSITE SIDES OF THE SPECTRUM AND HAVE TENSION BC THAT MEANS CHEMISTRY
What is this insanity bro like if this was at least entertaining brainrot I would just shut up and read it but this is like... Literally brainless nonsense
I think maybe this chapter in particular is meant to be extremely confusing and disorienting, just to reflect the events of the chapter and the emotions her mum and everyone else is going through and experiencing.
Why did he change outfits, accessories and hairstyles while going from one girl to another
Did it go back on hiatus after releasing like 3 chapters????
Pacing feels kinda disjointed - it's both too fast and slow, if that makes sense. The art cute, not too sure about the plot itself bc it's only 3 chapters in
ERUHABEN IS SO FINE I really can't take my eyes off him
Also Raon really is Cale's son cmon the way his eyes sparkle when goldie gramps said everything is free the father and son and grandson
Don't tell me you're giving that psycho a sad backstory
One day, on the last chapter, we're gonna look back and compare the last chapter titties and first chapter titties bc I swear they're blowing up little by little like a goddamn balloon
