holy fuck, this is SO good. from beginning to end, so so so good. seriously, i'd die for diesel, that is all.
sooo i just read this today and is it just me- or are there parts missing? especially at the beginning, it seems like scenes are missing but idk, maybe the story is just a bit fast paced.
i dont think so tho. I think that the story is quite complete. Idk maybe i just nvr realise
there's one page for sure that confused me, i'd have to find it again but i think it's on chapters 47-49or so? it looks like half of the page was cut off. maybe i just read it too fast, idk.
this was pretty good. the storyline gets a bit muddled at times and i could do without the rape :''') but this has a good plot.
i died a little inside with ryan tho.
I did not have high expectations for this at all but goddamn it was good. the plot is great, interesting concepts here. and jfc, Shell is so prettyyyyyyyy
Jooin- if you don't turn your little ass around and keep walking- istg
y'all are wild. i still don't stan it but that was cute :''')
all these comments are right, the ending is awful and the main couple kind of sucks. the storyline was pretty good but sheesh, they are toxic.
I feel like ppl are like that because what if someone was telling a good ass story or someone was telling what happen when you wake up from a 16 year old nap how would you feel? Unsatisfied right?
alright i'm gonna be honest, idc about the flashbacks, lmao. gah, i hate backstories that try and make me feel back for this dude repeatedly being a pos. i don't feel bad for him, i just don't care.
Same, this flashback did nothing for me lmao. Wasnt even anything that special tbh? At least it wasnt anything amazing enough to redeem yahwi and his actions thus far
exaaactly. like they could've gone with something more wholesome. no, i just learned he was a little bag of assholes as a kid too.
LMAAOOOO I WAS GON SAY THT TOO
he really just yeeted Gio LMAOOOO