Read this fluffy FF... https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12541968/1/My-dear-bastard-king
Dear God, who wrote this, a 5-year-old? Anyone who isn't aware of the basic rules of writing, doesn't know how to use reported speech, tenses, irregular verbs, singular/plural or even a simple spell check: Stop. Writing. Now.
You know what some one put time into this. So shut up if you don't like don't read!
lol i was thinking the same thing.
That's the point: It wasn't a good story and it wasn't well-written.
This is a great story - but very long http://archiveofourown.org/works/6469372
Thank you very much, Hol, but I will express my opinion freely and any which way I see fit. It's not rocket science you know: If people don't know the basics of the language they are writing in and if they don't know anything about how to write, then they shouldn't, well, WRITE. There is a million and one other things they can do. And there is a million and one things I am not good at. I can't draw, I can't paint. So imagine me if I start water colouring or oil paintings, plaster them all over town, have a big exhibition, expect people to rave about how great they are... And then start to bawl and pout when someone actually points out that they are absolute shit and say to them: "But, but, but... Not faiiiiiiiir!!! I puto so so much woooork and tiiiiiiiiiime into it!!!!!!!!!" So can't stand the heat? Get out of the fucking kitchen!!! If you want to write stories even though you don't have a basic grasp of your mother tongue and don't have a clue about writing? Go right ahead. But do it in the comfort of your home. Don't PUBLISH this crap and expect everyone to rave about it. Oh, and by the way: You didn't see me go to FF and leave a review, did you? I don't bother with that. But the link to this story was brought HERE. So yes, I will comment on it HERE. Also, in case you didn't know: It is clearly stated in FF's rules that stories need to meet certain quality standards in terms of structure and the quality of language that is used. I don't know if this particular option is still in place (I never go there these days), but until recently you could report a story for a different number of reasons - and one of them was if the story did NOT meet these quality guidelines. In other words: If a story wasn't structurally sound, was written in subpar English, riddled with mistakes (writing, diction, punctuation, grammar etc.) and didn't meet the required criteria, FF could and DID remove stories. In fact, they did this on a regular basis.
It is. To add some more:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/3706031/chapters/8202075
And:
http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/4902780?show_comments=true
And anything else that Sunflower has ever written:
http://archiveofourown.org/users/sunflower1343/pseuds/sunflower1343/works?fandom_id=68809
http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=sunflower1343
The problem with singling out a story or Fanart etc on here, whether you are the Author or artist or just a fan - is that you are exposing that creation to any and all ridicule, should your chosen audience see fit.
Why should people only say nice things??? Aren't people allowed to point out our mistakes? Yes it was put bluntly - as an author of fanfic I've also had people point out things to me from my stories in an unfavourable manner, and it was infuriating and upsetting - but that is the persons right.
If we choose to put our works out there, the general public are under no obligation to like them. Furthermore, responding to rudeness with rudeness can just exacerbate the issue. ( ̄∇ ̄")
Thank you for the recs! I've heard good things about these works
Uh lala.... did someone got his period?
Uh lala.... is someone here on his period?
No, girlfriend. Someone here got an opinion. You know what's great about that? You can have it every day of the month, there are no cramps, you don't need tampons or a mooncup and you don't have to worry about wearing white jeans. Glad to be of service, darling.
All of the awesome. You are going to love them! :)
Better Amelita's Princess. Am I right?
??? I'm sorry, Setp, but you lost me there. I googled this, because "Amelita's Princess" didn't mean anything to me. It seems there was a thread about this some time ago when the trolls where around, but I didn't follow that discussion and so I don't know what it was about - or how it is meant to be related to this current discussion, sorry. If you are insinuating by any chance that I was involved in that past discussion, then no, I wasn't.
There are some awesome authors out there. There are stories that I would easily buy as DJ. Divining Infinity, for example. The story is great and the art is just mindblowing. I would pay good money to have that as a bound copy eventually.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ASAMI , i believe you have received a special gift from Akihito ;)
https://www.google.com.hk/search?q=asami+x+takaba&client=ms-android-om-lge&tbm=isch&tbs=rimg:CQVx7ok6LzpDIkCjuydVg9tZ7K-Mvx3O0fihTmu5kDU2WvUZ7e5BfNq32KHICjGdU4-jHTL5qLcVcHbILHdzurxCtJovgI042_12KKhIJo7snVYPbWewRCe2lQuyrX5EqEgmvjL8dztH4oRHyelJjI-upayoSCU5ruZA1Nlr1ETJVNPwQC-5qKhIJGe3uQXzat9gR0WnldOMnzYqEgmhyAoxnVOPoxGVj6yV7I-qbioSCR0y-ai3FXB2EdAkOr6lZGCPKhIJyCx3c7q8QrQRL6zs5wLvZAMqEgmaL4CNONv9ihFxQ6O_157wBJQ%3D%3D&tbo=u&ved=0ahUKEwiPkeSq5LzVAhXBJ5QKHRIkBj8QuIIBCCM#imgrc=BXHuiTovOkPqlM
Just idiot who always asking why Asami didn't love feilong ? Or blam him bcz didn't love fei..(╯-╰)/ .. People have own taste and you can't push what the other person want and likes ...!!! Just ask yourselves what's your reaction if your parents ask you to dating / married with someone you dont like ?? ...
This extra make AXA`s haters BURNING in the hole hell , why hate aki so much hahahahaahahha , why you didn't accept if this story about AXA not feilongXasami..lol.. !!
Yep.
Not haters. Trolls are more like it. Why would you be so naive to think the troll is opinion of the silent majority? Not loving AxA doesn't make one hater, a'ite?
yeah, like soulmates, that's so precious ^^
You two realise that it easy to imitate your "Username" if you are anon, right? The bitch with my "StepLeft" name that said they were kidding about shipping AxF is NOT me.
So yeah, I'm still luxury cruising AsamixFei. ヾ(☆▽☆)
Anon or whatever she was isn't the only one who said those kind of things so please stop talking anon anon anon ... come on is anon the only hater here so stop using anon everytime u want to defend your point of view i mean guys blaming anon and not any another one u just became addicted tO it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ plus it doesn't matter if it's serious or not as long as it was in the end true :3
Did you understand that Feilong NOW no longer sees Asami in a romantic way? And that he gives to Asami his mobile so that he can contact Akihito? You can dream because everyone does what he wants, but Fei has gone further. In addition, I think Sensei will introduce yaoi scenes for the Chinese too, one must understand who (Yoh? Mik? Kuroda?) Yes, I say Kuroda; No clue, but I have a strange feeling ......
Don't bother turning the conversation round and round. I always see you being rude with Fei fans here (in general) for no rhyme nor reason. Read your previous sentence again, here let me quote it for your convenience "..last time when i said that a lot of AxF fans are jealous of akihito relationship with asami they said no this is stupid we are not jealous this is not true but today they show how their hearts are plenty of hate and jealousy". How does that sound? Did you bother to clarify for yourself that this anon troll & Fei fans who defended themselves back then (yes that includes dragonlady & myself) are not even the same person? Don't bother to answer. It's rhetorical.
Yes it is rhetorical, and then I say: It seems clear that Feilong no longer wants Asami, but he has more heart to Akihito and Baishe (the first place there is Tao of course); Then, what are we talking about? AxF against AxA ?? !!! But they are all three allies now!
I had that horrible sickness as an adult (I took that from my child) and it was an experience beyond my immagination, my child had only slight fever and the red spots, instead I had high fever for many days and I was looking like a monster with the red spots that left me some scars all over my face. Grrrrrr. I wanted to take the antiviral but my mother told me that I had had the chickenpox while a child... instead she was wrong (it was rubella, maybe) ヽ(`Д´)ノ ヽ(`Д´)ノ
Sorry i don't remember being rude to fei's fans as they were rude to a lot of other fans plus since u are using what i did write before why don't u read it well cuz when u do u'll find that i did wrote " a lot of " and not " the most of " or " all of " and i've never attacked all the membres of the fandom i did only attacked the haters but if u like to protect your haters then it's your pro ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
These couple is really similar with aki & asami
https://twitter.com/hwanggomh/status/874813643405250560?s=08
So beautiful
beautiful !! They are just Asami and Aki!
yeah, so beautiful , Gonna read this manga, *Escort lily* right?
If you like Fluff and Angs story. .. http://archiveofourown.org/works/11183823/chapters/24968979
Continuation pleeaassee..
I love it!!!!
There are others who love it so ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
Fei knew he was tailed by asami`s enemy but why he still come to meet asami at his hiding place ..? I think Aki`s message not one of reason why fei dare to lead those attackers in to asami`s secret place.
cos he desperate to see Asami ... so he use aki message as an excuse... but he too excited to see Asami and didn't check if anyone following him .. genius .....
I used to think Fei only wanted to deliver Aki's message, possibly there was something important there or he just thought it was a good thing to put both in contact. But considering FNR, Fei is over Asami already, isn't it? Oo
I think Fei was rattled when he heard they had gone after Tao.