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Okay, there are a lot of things going wrong here and I'll start with, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO THE STORY?
It had a good start, a good storyline, good lines, but then it's over 50 chapters and everything slowly went downhill like a pile of trash.
The things that were of importance like the evolution of the MC's minions, apart from Lye, they were no longer included in the story. I mean, we see the Griffin as a chick in one chapter and the next he got big all of a sudden. All the other minions were the same. I thought this was a story about taming monsters and yet I no longer see the essence of taming them and the progress of training them.
Also, I have no problem with the romance bit but aren't they doing it too fast? Not just that, they made every scene happen so fast it's like I reading this in fast forward.
I was actually looking forward to the battle of the guilds, especially the second round because the MC went on and say it's gonna be harder than the first round but then--poof! Nothing. No battle, no fights, no nothing. They skipped that arc and just ended it without even telling us the results.
Everything is happening so fast here and the story is losing its quality just a fast.
I think I really liked the story to the part where the MC got the Griffin, but beyond that, the story is like hail Mary.
I'm rather disappointed. It's not worth the ratings if the story is this crappy. It's very painful for me as a reader that something so good, with potential, and that started off really well, fell like this.
I'm out. Not gonna waste more time here otherwise I'll be slandering this story.
I can never not find the comedic bits funny!
I'm going crazy reading this story. I've never read a story so deep and so beautiful in my life. Every arc is an entire story in itself, it's like I'm travelling through different places in a single story and it's gonna break my heart real bad once this story ends.
I've earned an enlightenment about love in reading this story and I can confidently say, that I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY. Unconditionally.
I sometimes exaggerate on my reviews and comments on the stories I've read, but this is one of the few of them where I genuinely believe that this story is a masterpiece. Read it and you'll understand what I mean. Otherwise, you're missing out something so wholesome and beautiful.
I mean, after reading several dud stories in a row for the past several days, this story is sort of a miracle for me.
Yeah....nothing to add but yeah...it's good. reallyy good. I agree..
if youre thinking about reading trust this person and read it
GOD ITS SO WELL DONE it almost pisses me off lol
Have you read Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint yet?
Who hasn't, yeah?
I meant that this one was focusing too much on the deeper meaning of everything we take for granted in life so it fascinated me as the author managed to keep the story's flow going with a lot of elements they introduced in the story.
Most stories get lost in the flow because they keep inserting various elements that are not relevant and the balance gets messed up. The story from then on just doesn't make any sense that it loses its "essence"
Ik alat