It's very poorly written but it's fun to read, just the scene with the black-haired guy where he's opening up about his past and she interrupts him to try to initiate something sexual... It was very uncomfortable.
I get it, she's a sucker for romance, yeah, kind of boring and cringe-worthy, but someone starts venting to you and all you can think about is taking sexual advantage of them? Crazy.
but other than that, there's nothing else interesting in the story, it's just hot men and a harem in reverse, there's nothing else in the history, kinda boring tbh
How come everyone is hating the FL?
Ya'll just forgot that the FL doesn't have the same point of view as we do. Yeah, we know he's not the killer, but she does NOT know half the things we do. If I were in her shoes, I would also be so suspicious, especially since we are talking about MY life at risk.
"But look at the way he treats her-!" Let's start with the fact that him falling in love with her does NOT prevent him from being serial killer lol. He could very well be a murderer and end up falling in love with her and not killing her. And another thing, 99% of the evidence points to him. How do u guys expect her to stop suspecting him? Just because he acts romantic towards her?
it is dumb that she's focusing ONLY on him, but wanting her to automatically get rid of all suspicions about him just because he's actin cute to her... She's been smart in a lot of situations so far, but just because she doesn't want to fully trust the main suspect in her death, suddenly she's stupid? aint no way
I mean she focuses on him because that's the only thing she knew from the novel but she's investigating everything and when another suspect showed up, she didn't ignore that as well, so I'd say she's doing well.
Aside from that, I do agree with you.
the story had the potential to be good if they hadn't involved her mother their sick lovestory, they freakin killed her so they could be together.. bruh. And worst of all, she didn't seem to care much about going to fuck with her dead mother's husband.
plus, there were a lot of scenes that were uncomfortable bc it was just her forcing herself on him. Can we really call this love? yeah, she loved him, but he didn't show any kind of romantic love for her other than sexual attraction. n he only started fucking her bc she was practically begging him to y'now
anyway, the story had potential
Nah, I'll drop it at chapter 20, the story is interesting but why couldn't they keep the original romance? idk, It would have been so much more interesting, and have another ML for her. i'm so sick of this plot of "I'll help him get together with his original romantic partner!" and then he falls in love with her. I usually like it, but this one isn't done well, especially when he gets obsessive and possessive over her and treats her friends badly, I just think it would have been much more interesting if they left the original novel
I hate him so much, I didn't want them to end up together, at first he was even trying to improve for her but then he fucked everything up once and for all. I know they're going to end up together, that's why I already say I hate the ending.
It's getting confusing, I really liked the story but from the spoilers I read at the end it's not worth continuing reading-
You might be a victim of the incomplete spoiler just like I was. Someone posted the true ending here and it has more details too but I forgot the username( I think there was a 'cutie' included in that username) It's better to start looking from the last page of comments
bruh I thought it was cute and funny at first, but it started to get bad when I realized that the FL is extremely selfish. Like, playing with ML's heart just because she thinks she's going to die? Wanting to date him and do dating things, making him fall in love, when she doesn't even love him that much? Like, okay, you're going to die and you want to fall in love before that, but she doesn't even really love him and that's extremely selfish
I think the story had a lot of potential but it wasn't developed properly. I really liked it, and I know it's a reverse harem typa shit, but like, the relationship between them was totally quick and meaningless. There's no reason for them to like her so much to the point of sacrificing so much, they haven't even known her for that long.
She didn't do anything to make them fall so deeply in love with her, in fact, they hated her before since the original FL acted like that, a literal villain. Their relationship development was very precarious and shallow, but the story is kinda cool.
bruh, I can't, I'll have to drop it in chapter 9. This story is too boring. FL is so stupid it makes me angry to read. Why is she so arrogant when she's only lost to the pink-haired bitch so far? All she's done is get beaten up, and every plan she has goes wrong. Like
The ending was really cute