
Wow. Just wow. I can't express how boring, and flat these characters are in the second half of the story. After they graduated, it was pwp. Why is this still going on? it's just niggas doing things after hs. What is the plot. I feel like I'm rereading potn again by how non-story like it is. I truly don't understand how anyone can sit through this without snoring at least once. The authors dragging this out, and honestly, each new chapter is making the story progressively worse. It's mediocrity in its purest form. I can't express how much this story is losing it's charm and meaning after they started having sex. But even then, this story lacked something. it is lacking a substance. It is lacking. Just lacking lacking. In what exactly? well, just plot, characters, world building, and everything really. Its nothing special, and it doesn't have to be. But, at least do something with your story instead of adding cheap telonovela type drama just because you don't know what to do with this story. Just end it. There is no more passion in this story. I don't see a fire, I don't see a motive. I just don't see it
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