It really did have the potential, it felt like it would do good if it was the usual 6 chapter BL.
Ch 4: Uke and son doing their best to survive while seme tries to continue college. End it with a cliffhanger where they finally see each other
Ch 5: continue the cliffhanger, the two catch up, uke feeling somewhat hesitant to be with seme. Seme insists. They confess, they kiss.
Ch 6: steamy sex. Boom pregnant.
Ch 6.5: epilogue, they old, they die, their children happy with their family visits their grave.
Cliche but better ig
Oh GOSH HE'S SO STUPID ╥﹏╥ IS HE TURNING HIS IMAGE 180° BC HE KNOWS GARAM DOESNT LIKE HIS PLAYBOY CHARACTER （/TДT)/ IM BAWLING THAT'S SO CUTE
was one of the few who wanted to read more bc I wanted seme to grovel on the ground, asking for uke's forgiveness but seeing how passive uke is, I think he'll forgive seme after a short while. He's going to let seme chase him for a bit but nonetheless, he's going to give in easier than what I wanted to imagine him to. Also, I want him to not have feelings for seme when on the chasing arc, like he's done with him. Ieiwjdwiwdjd
However, there's still a chance that the redemption arc would be satisfying enough so not gonna drop this
My only thing about the ending is Kazuma still being rekki just give him back pls
Question:
I've read this actually a while ago and with little to 15 chaps or less. And I skipped some chaps rn and why are they more "modernized"? Like why are they in the city all of a sudden? Is the story really modern and they were just settled in the province area?
All right girl for me to tell you I’m gonna have to spoil you, so prepare yourself. I’m gonna do it right after this sentence. they’re in a modern world right now because we’re continuing and in their new life right now like this is their reincarnation because you know…..yeah but not for the black haired guy though because he’s been here through all these years because you know it’s some supernatural shit going on.
ohhhh shtttttttt so he's kinda immortal? He doesn't age? So the young master died in their first life? Defawkkkkk imma read this
GWORL ITS GOOD U WONT REGRET IT
Hes not immortal, they both died but you'll have to read it to understand how that happens.
naur, his sob story won't make me open my heart for him, even for a little. Fuck him
I'm in one of those "episodes" where my mind goes off with "what if" situations. What if MC went outside to look for ML bc it was raining hard, doesn't pick up his phone, was not home later than usual. Then MC gets into an accident and he got hospitalized, ML only gets to know this the next morning bc he was too drank. Ooohhhh the drama
No lie would live for that type of angst rn. It squeezes your heart in the right spots
u mean like a car accident? isnt that how his parents died
Thats what he gets for drinking with douche kang
Girl,u better write a fanfic. I'll read it
Same!
And he accidentally slept with that bitchy manager. Much painful and angst.
grrrrr imagine the guilt GUILT. He had sex (cheated) while his beloved is fighting for his life just bc MC wanted to look for him
I'd actually love too but my writing depends on my mood so it'd really suckΣ( ￣□￣||)
Trueee! like I would literally hate him forever