
A note to the author , i hope she reads it. The story plotting is great but if you keep this too short you may lose the reader base. It is not good. cos people get busy or move on after a while this interest may die off. you dont want that right ... Please try to release the chapters with flow and regularity. Well this is not going to be only one book that you will be writing correct
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QBx1W9PDddo
This is what is call hot !!!